View Full Version : Basic uppercut

11-11-2014, 02:00 PM
Made my own uppercut. Check it out there! http://www.fastswf.com/9dXFrnc

CnC is appreciated.

11-12-2014, 08:25 AM
Well first off...

1. I dont think he even hits the guy. Its very hard to see. Its too fast. Add more frames so we can clearly see the uppercut.

2. The stick construction is aweful. They have a straight leg that doesnt bend. and their arms are just straight lines. You should take my advice and look at how to make a proper stick figure

3. Make it more realistic. No one is going to go 5 feet in the air if they are uppercut. They would just basically get knock backed OR they will just land our their back and they wont go so high in the air but just simply fall on the ground but make sure you add force so it makes it worthy of being superb punch.

4. Your main problem is the basics of animating. You need to learn them by looking at movement and basics of animating tutorials. They shouldn't be too hard to find.

5. When he hits the ground you made the stickfigure with no legs. You need make sure to have the character at the same level with the other too.

Before I say more I think you really don't need to stress about some of these. You just got to focus on the basics of animating right now.

11-13-2014, 09:29 AM
Ssos i was not stressed.

11-13-2014, 08:12 PM
Ssos i was not stressed.

Never said you did stress XD I was saying don't STRESS about some of the CnC's I gave you since you needed some of the basics of animating. I say don't stress as in don't worry or focus on those.

11-14-2014, 01:08 AM
Yes, please focus on learning some foundations first! I definitely encourage investing in extra frames to emphasize some hits and investing some extra time to develop your work much more further!

Study this: http://the12principles.tumblr.com/