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New Generation
07-22-2008, 07:31 PM
Wrote a poem and haven't really got any recognizable attention for it?

Well here is the thread to post them here and get feedback!!!

Maybe...we'll see.

Anyways here's mine:

FIRST EVER POEM!(OMGZ!1111):
Walk over the sandy beaches,peace and quite...
Sit at sundown,walk beneath the rain.
Feel the world surround you, that your not the only one...
That's having this unforgettable night, in peace and quite...
Jobs and cars are extra things that make you happy and can make money for you but the true power...

is love, and love itself can make you happy.

SECOND EVER POEM:
Faith and will...
that is the humans senses.
The one's and only points of being scared.
Even if it takes life, you try your hardest.
Sometimes it is impossible, uncontrollable...
You let your anger out, but your will is not strong enough
That is the true path of a gentle person.
The one who controls his anger.
The one who loves life.
The one who seeks true peace for his soul.
As thou his life depends on it, nothing in the world can stop that man...
Even death itself cannot stop him, as he can continue his journey after death, and shal God help him enlighten his path...
of freedom, peace and faith.

New Generation
07-23-2008, 01:40 PM
So your all telling me that there is not even one ****ing SINGLE member that never wrote a poem in his entire life?

Great, just great...

Trypheon
07-23-2008, 03:32 PM
I wrote a poem so here it goes.
To tell these people that poetry blows
Now let your voices roar to hear
**** poetry, I'm out of here.

Schwa
07-23-2008, 03:50 PM
So your all telling me that there is not even one ****ing SINGLE member that never wrote a poem in his entire life?

Great, just great...

Nobody likes the literature section.

Trypheon
07-23-2008, 03:55 PM
Nobody likes the literature section.

The literature section is underrated.

New Generation
07-23-2008, 04:22 PM
At least Poems are things that spark your imagination to life and may inspire other people, you idiots. You don't know the true life. It's not all about money but peace, living peacefully and not taking drugs or other things. Just life. You don't get paid off by working hard but working RIGHT.