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DotGod
02-28-2015, 10:26 AM
Did a walk/run/jump and roll practice .... wanted to really finish the practice before I started practicing combos again. XD but ya teach me how I can make it better.... and can anyone tell me more about when to double frame still confused on that.

http://www.hyunsdojo.com/dojo/3658/

Dot out.

AwesTube
02-28-2015, 01:12 PM
Two things for the walking and the running the middle part (where the legs overlap/cross) its way to stretched out try to make that part shorter.
Second the jump its nice but the jump mid-air looks similar to when it was standing and when he gets up from the fall its too slow.

poisonchocolate
02-28-2015, 01:17 PM
You're definitely improving. I can't really give any flash specific tips, but I would say the animation needs more flow, especially when he rolls; by flow, I mean removing unnecessary changes of velocity. For a more thorough explanation, look at this link (it was written for pivot but is applicable in any animation program): http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?32287-Flow-Everything-You-Need-To-Know

DotGod
02-28-2015, 03:50 PM
Two things for the walking and the running the middle part (where the legs overlap/cross) its way to stretched out try to make that part shorter.
Second the jump its nice but the jump mid-air looks similar to when it was standing and when he gets up from the fall its too slow.


You're definitely improving. I can't really give any flash specific tips, but I would say the animation needs more flow, especially when he rolls; by flow, I mean removing unnecessary changes of velocity. For a more thorough explanation, look at this link (it was written for pivot but is applicable in any animation program): http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?32287-Flow-Everything-You-Need-To-Know

Thank you both soo much it really helps and thx for the link Poison.
Also idk if i am really getting better but thanks for watching me.

generalZ
03-01-2015, 08:46 AM
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