View Full Version : My drawin's and practice

07-28-2008, 08:04 AM

Though this is a quick doodle :Ohhhhh:
Just tell me about my mistakes .

I can't draw anything lately , maybe because I miss animating with my tablet .
And got used to a mouse .

07-28-2008, 08:10 AM
That's actually mighty cool.
I don't like the hair, and the sketchy-ness. The front of the sword confused me alot, as he's holding one gun, but it looks as though two are being clamped together.

The hair needs to be more realistic, I know it's not that type of drawing, but it would look better. The big clump of hair sticking out on the top is offputting. That may be why I dislike the hair.
The nose is out of proportion, compared to placement of the mouth. It looks as though it's in the wrong place. The head looks like it's in an angle, due to the nose, but the mouth says otherwise.
Also, ears are in-line with your eyes. Not below. Not bad though.

The sword and blade are off, look at the sword angle compared to how the gun is being held.

You wanted Harsh crit'.

Looks like you were inspired by Dante?
Apart from what I pointed out, which aren't that major, it's very good.

07-28-2008, 08:19 AM
Yeah ! The sword is attached to the end of the gun , and then I realized it is facing the wrong side LOL .
No sketchiness right ?
Next time I'll do a not so sketchy one ;)

I'm trying hard at angles yea :)

This helps too much :)
Thanks !

:O Who's Dante ?

07-28-2008, 08:34 AM
:O Who's Dante ?

Dante is the main character in the game "Devil May Cry". Your drawing reminded me of him, the stance and hair.

07-28-2008, 09:39 AM
only thing i saw wrong with it is how one eye is slightly bigger than the other, maby fix the position of the nose to. 10/10

07-30-2008, 03:46 AM
hmm i can only find one thing wrong....
the face is kinda wierd. but i meen forget the face! its awesome!!!

07-30-2008, 01:44 PM
I like it. it was drawn with a very good style. The only thing I can see wrong with it is the things afore mentioned. The weird clump of hair on the top of his head, and the sword thing attached to the gun clip looks weird.

07-30-2008, 02:48 PM
WAA you r getting anoying puikey!

you do every thing good >:l

good job man i luv it the bladed gun gives me some interesting ideas

07-30-2008, 08:46 PM
WAA you r getting anoying puikey!

you do every thing good >:l

good job man i luv it the bladed gun gives me some interesting ideas

Grammar get. For the love of god.

08-01-2008, 12:55 AM
AnimeFag alert.

08-01-2008, 11:02 AM
Very good, but here's somethings I got to say about this. The gun/sword thing isn't attached correctly and it looks sort of funny. His nose needs to be moved a "little bit".
Other than that it's fine and I would like to see more!!!

08-06-2008, 08:57 PM
2 things i see wrong with this:

1: the blade is crooked

2: the actual gun itself looks kind of... awkward? something along those lines.