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TheOrigin
10-03-2015, 10:34 PM
im working on an intro, heres what i have so far.
http://www.filz.us/view/596a7627-a28/
can i get some suggestions?

GMR
10-03-2015, 11:24 PM
Pretty good music synching. I'd suggest more of an intro with the words, and a slightly thicker line. Besides that, I just don't like that song in general, but eh XD

Arch-Angel
10-03-2015, 11:29 PM
very bland and too long for an intro

Isaac
10-04-2015, 01:10 AM
Needs more effects In It but yeah It's still In progress

TheOrigin
10-04-2015, 01:38 AM
thanks for the suggestions and Arch, its still a WIP. and its only that long because i couldnt find a song with a base drop that i could fade out without making it sound weird.
??? what do you mean with words, like where the word rotates around in 3d, i dont have enough time for that
and karimoo, what do you mean by effects?

EDITED VERSION
http://www.filz.us/view/acedd3b8-f34/

GMR
10-04-2015, 09:37 AM
On phone so I can't see if you fixed it, but I meant there was no transition from where the word was NOT there, and then it just was there. Looked odd.

TheOrigin
10-04-2015, 07:55 PM
On phone so I can't see if you fixed it, but I meant there was no transition from where the word was NOT there, and then it just was there. Looked odd.

Thats because the base dropped. Its supposed to look like that (btw on my phone)

Dragzor
10-11-2015, 07:19 PM
Ummm... do you have a Deviantart? Coz' I can't view stuff in Fileize and I was wondering if I could see your intro

TheOrigin
10-12-2015, 03:04 PM
Ummm... do you have a Deviantart? Coz' I can't view stuff in Fileize and I was wondering if I could see your intro

oh yeah, i noticed filz was being a bitch lately lol.
http://pewdieoriginz.deviantart.com/art/Intro-565846771

GMR
10-12-2015, 04:24 PM
Fileize never works. Jeff even recommended switching to DA or some other file hosting service.