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Bubba Jones
08-04-2008, 06:11 PM
here are some poems. say what you like/ don't like whatever.

First one:

But now it's gone!
The incessant werring might be done,
and let the mind rest in un-dulled feeling:
remembering; and only then-rejoicing.

And the always-ignoring tyranny,
unknowingly gives way to
less obstrusive sounds-
happy to be quiet.

Next one:

The room is pleasantly close,
from the inside lights
and the closed up outdoors

Sitting with time passing quickly by the wall-
too quick for monotony

But setting something in its distance;
some well imagined future:
waiting, to forget the waiting from before.

zawmbee
08-05-2008, 11:04 AM
BOO!
more adjectives, i couldnt picture any of them >: (
they were good, just need to go into more detail.
Very interesting though.
More please.

Bubba Jones
08-05-2008, 07:23 PM
moar comments.