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Reigning Capricorn
04-25-2016, 03:57 PM
Hello! I decided to make a small animation of Capricorn. Also this was made with Adobe Flash CS6, When I would usually use Macromedia 8. I like it better personally, do you think I'm doing better?

Also check out my RHG (http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?99288-Cal-quot-The-Capricorn-quot) if you did not already.


https://youtu.be/MnC3b5uM1bo

Creepin_Bro
04-25-2016, 07:26 PM
way to much camera tweening, and it kinda looked like he moved to the side, moved back, and stood still, try having the camera move slower than him

also, when people slide, the always lean backwards, if they don't, they fall forwards, no exceptions

his right (im going off the side of the screen) knee also tends to bend in a way it should not bend

over all, practice is how you get better, and the fact that you even made this, is great

(also you might want to make the lines a bit thicker, but that might just be my opinion)