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    It's not that I can't rework him into a better character, but I don't feel I could do him justice considering what he was supposed to be like (powerful warrior who sought out challenges) and what he ended up being (lazy guy who likes bloodshed). I need to make a character whose personality (and abilities) I'm comfortable writing while still sorta getting out of the comfort zone. I'm not really shy about my past work (It's not that bad, to be honest with myself, just the characters) so that's not an issue, and neither is the rust. I've been writing for a while, just not on Stickpage, and mostly RPs.
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    Oh yes, definitely. I'm scrapping Caesar, though. I feel he doesn't stick out enough personality-wise for me to write more of him, and his abilities were rather generic, I feel. I'll figure out a better combatant to write.
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    I'm back. Not that you would remember me; but I had Caesar as a character in wRHG.
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    No problem
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    I can't really explain it, it's the general tone I think that you've really improved on. Believe me, it was difficult to determine who I would vote for.
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    I'm heading to work soon, but once I'm there I'll give your stories a good look
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    OHHHHHH. Okay now I understand.

    Well, I think for the most part it was just a little clunky. Like, you tried to put too many things in at once. Icarus, the magician, orion and the chimeras and it was hard to tell which was which sometimes. I think just specifiying some things a bit more and adding more detail would help you greatly. And as I said before, the corny jokes just didn't fit with the Sci-Fi for me. However, that's a matter of opinion and Devour got a chuckle out of them, so I wouldn't worry too much about that!

    Also, the last thing is--I'm surprised at how much you've improved! Your writing has really gotten great, man!

    One more thing, Could you actually do me a favor and vote on my match with Tsar Bomba when you get the chance?
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    Basically, you just have to say what you liked and stuff you didn't like and ways the things that aren't liked can be improved. You don't even have to add the improved part, just what you liked and didn't if you can't think of anything.
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    Clear yo inbox bro.
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