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    Heh, you say that like CnC was ever that common,...

    Heh, you say that like CnC was ever that common, especially in O Lit
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    Thank you! I'm going to try highlighting things...

    Thank you! I'm going to try highlighting things as I go, but I'm a little hesitant to show everyone's full backstory all at once since I don't want an essay of expositions. They'll have their...
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    Returning the favor you've been returning Oh...

    Returning the favor you've been returning

    Oh hey, I'm at the style change!

    I'd say the main thing to keep an eye on between chapters 8 and 9 is making sure the conflicts matter outside the...
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    Thank you, I really appreciate all that! I'm...

    Thank you, I really appreciate all that! I'm trying to do a bit more background in this chapter, but I'm hesitant to put many rules of the world in the story in a factual sense since much of it will...
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    Gah! Spelling. My arch nemesis. I'll have to...

    Gah! Spelling. My arch nemesis. I'll have to do some better reads then, maybe check with more than Google Docs too. Thank you for the feedback! I'll try watching how many characters have too...
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    A Kindness of Ravens

    Goals for the year:

    1) Write more
    2) Finish a story
    3) Lose 3.4 pounds

    I like the characters. Have a planned plot. Let's see how this goes!


    A Kindness of Ravens
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    Grrrr. Alright, here we go! So, at the top,...

    Grrrr.

    Alright, here we go!

    So, at the top, you open with a bit of an inner monologue from Elise listing off what's wrong. If possible, try avoiding making it a straight forward statement. ...
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    What was I on, Chapter 6? Wait COMIC SANS!?...

    What was I on, Chapter 6?

    Wait

    COMIC SANS!?
    AAAAAAAAAAAAGGGHHH

    But anyway

    You're opening with a strong topic, the maybe death of a liked one, so be sure to give yourself a little time to...
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    Eh, what the hell Here are a few bands that I...

    Eh, what the hell

    Here are a few bands that I stumbled on

    Season to Attack: How to Burn One Night (Fast Paced Rock)
    Wait a minute,
    are you all seeing this time just passing by?
    Seems like...
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    "I would," The redhead replied with an even tone,...

    "I would," The redhead replied with an even tone, "I think it's important to know things, good or bad. If you had a fatal disease, wouldn't you want to know? It's... similar, in my book. If it...
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    Johni let out a huff. It was official, no one...

    Johni let out a huff. It was official, no one there watched Game of Thrones, or at least not past the first couple episodes. "I'd ask him out for coffee," She stated, "I think I mentioned the value...
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    "Medusa's thing is man exclusive, right?" Johni...

    "Medusa's thing is man exclusive, right?" Johni questioned, leaning back, "'Cause it's mostly men fuckin' me up right now, so that'd be helpful. For my pick though, I'd love to pet a Cerberus or...
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    "I'd say lazier," Johni shrugged, "You get a lot...

    "I'd say lazier," Johni shrugged, "You get a lot of energy from meat, and if animals could talk, more people would be vegan, people would be getting less protein, and I suppose it would spiral like...
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    "Ya know what, sports would be good," Johni...

    "Ya know what, sports would be good," Johni grinned as the thought struck her, "All the games would be nail biters and the good team always comes out on... but only if they're rookies." She dragged...
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    "I'd hate to say it, but I'd probably market it,"...

    "I'd hate to say it, but I'd probably market it," Annabelle admitted, "When I made enough to relocate I'd leave, but it's not like the bank would refund me, and if I sold it, it'd be a coin toss if...
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    "Personally, I think nature plays a bigger part...

    "Personally, I think nature plays a bigger part into it than I'd like to admit," Annabelle confessed, "Sure, choices are involved, but some people are sadists while others can't even hunt. People...
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    Annabelle nodded at the answered. "I could never...

    Annabelle nodded at the answered. "I could never listen to heavy music growing up, so anyone I've driven with can testify that I play it a lot now. Rise Against consistently has a softer, deep song...
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    "By without consequence, I meant without getting...

    "By without consequence, I meant without getting the ill-effects of not doing the thing. Like, if you don't like to shower, just being clean when you woke up." Annabelle shrugged, "I'd cut making...
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    Sticky: I for sure thought I'd already recommended the...

    I for sure thought I'd already recommended the one book I read in the past several years. Huh.

    If you're familiar with Cracked, Chris Bucholz is the guy who wrote all fake apologies, notes and...
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    "For me, I don't know what category this falls...

    "For me, I don't know what category this falls into, between prank and vengeance, but when I was in elementary school, someone kept stealing from my lunchbox," Annabelle leaned back a little,...
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    Poll: Don't worry, first fight's always the hardest.

    Don't worry, first fight's always the hardest.
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    "I don't think he believes in second chances,"...

    "I don't think he believes in second chances," Annabelle admitted, "He had a bad first day here, and he's refused to see any good since. In five years he'll hopefully be long home, but I imagine...
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    "I've got a colleague with an-" Annabelle was...

    "I've got a colleague with an-" Annabelle was about to say excessive, "-a stupid amount of space tattooed over his..." Her wrist rolled a few rotations, "Everything. We're not very close, but we're...
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    It was Derrick's wholesome response that made...

    It was Derrick's wholesome response that made Johni realize she picked wrong. "Alright, I regret my impulse answer," She admitted, "More than seeing dinosaurs, I'd like to meet my Aunt Kyra and...
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    Puppy smirked as the last bit reminded her of her...

    Puppy smirked as the last bit reminded her of her dad, but didn't speak up, opting out of bonding with the torture fanatic.

    "If I just blurted everything I thought, I wouldn't be able to hold down...
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