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Thread: Bloodlines [Chapter 2]

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    Quote Originally Posted by Devour View Post
    I do have an apology to make... I didn't discuss the signup thing with Hewitt before I posted it LMAO

    He wants to choose which members to include, and I agree after a bit of discussion. It gives us a lot more freedom with what we decide to do with the story.

    But while we're writing this for the fun of it, we also want you guys to read and enjoy what we're making. Signing up still shows me that you guys are interested in this collab, and so that definitely makes me more inclined to include you as characters.

    Stay tuned for now. We have a bit of planning to do, and we should hopefully have actually writing being posted not too long from now
    Hoorah!

    I shall await for part 1 on my chair.




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    Either way, its interesting and will be a good read.

    SP.NET is still one of the things I want to read, even Devour's old thing where the mods are like demons and angels... something. Haha.



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    The intro is out! Sorry for such a delay on the first part. Hewitt just had some ISP issues. We brainstormed a lot for the next part already so that one shouldn't take as long


    Spoiler for Prologue:

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vorpal View Post
    Yeah that's 5056 IFUKDURMOM drive, it's the house on the end and the road is a long one.
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    You know what's really long? The dick I'm gonna stick in your nostril you lil cumbucket spitoon ass bitch.
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    Will that be cash or credit?
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    I'll take your food stamps card you broke crackwhore no-teeth having, giving gumjobs for a bump ass musty hag.

    Or just any card. Debit or Bredit works

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    Certainly a good intro. Piqued my interest.

    Took me a little while to realize that it was a recorded log and not a written one...
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    Quote Originally Posted by Devour View Post
    The intro is out! Sorry for such a delay on the first part. Hewitt just had some ISP issues. We brainstormed a lot for the next part already so that one shouldn't take as long


    Spoiler for Prologue:
    Questions:

    1. Is Magus short for Manthagues, or...?
    2. Aethersphere as in this right?
    3. '..These people..', the people of Aethesphere? (or is it a suspense?)
    4. What does Trinket mean here? (the usual meaning in dictionary?)
    5. '..someone from Aether would have noticed.' Noticed the demons, correct?
    6. '..Who are these demons? (will be explained further or, did I miss something?)
    7. 'If I laid out everything here and now I will have to pay extra for my coffee just to show I'm still enjoying their patronage and that diner lady is already looking at me funny.' I didn't get the 'paying extra to show you're enjoying the patronage' bit actually, could you elaborate? (I get that he has already spent a lot of time in that place because of which he'll be kicked out soon, but the rest?...)
    8. 'I've seen them..' The demons again right?
    9. Fonts of Knowledge?
    10. '..as soon as I helped myself to it.' Meaning even he can't explain how he did it, right?


    It actually took me some time to realize that he was talking to the diner lady after, '..these Trinkets I keep acquiring are..', but when I did, it was funny! [bonus question: '...are fake.'? He didn't finish his sentence there right? Suspense again?]
    Nice work on it Devour & Hewitt, waiting for the next part! (btw how exactly did you guys collaborate on this?)
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    All your questions are probably stuff that will be expanded on later into the story. Except for 7, which I don't understand how you don't get it. If you're in a shop, you're expected to buy stuff, not lounge around, lest you buy something else and "pay extra." That would send the message that he's staying there long because he likes what they sell instead of he's staying long only because he needed a place to sit.

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