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Thread: Stickpage File 578: Farukon - The Sky Guardian (wRHG Submission | Unavailable).

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    Stickpage File 578: Farukon - The Sky Guardian (wRHG Submission | Unavailable).

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    Percius R. Farukon.


    wRHG Profile: Percius R. Farukon, Rank G-B Gladiator.



    This is the profile of the official Stickpage Rock Hard Gladiator Percy Farukon, and is managed by his publicist.




    Quote Originally Posted by Percius R. Farukon
    "If you want to kill me, you'll need more than a stone." - Farukon



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    Badge of Conquest:


    Some of Percy's information on the obsolete Writer's Rankings and Badges of Conquest.

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    Conquests:
    N/A.



    Statistics:

    These are the stats that some RHG's have. Mine are out of ten (ten being super awesome and Tentionmaru level and one being super bad and showcases no experience and matches that of your average 16-year old). Note that Percy may or may not be able to exceed his limitations, but these stats represent his average state (the first number) and the highest he's ever gone while conscious (the second number).


    Strength: 5.5 - 7 (Above average for humans).
    Defense: 5.5 (A tad bit above average for humans).
    Speed: 6 - 7 (Above average for humans).
    Stamina: 7 - 7.5 (Above average for humans).
    Intelligence: 8.5 (An IQ of 147).
    Response: 7 (Above average for humans).



    Recent Changes and Edits/Changelog:
    A log of the latest changes and edits made to this thread. It's pretty much a changelog that only shows the past two edits (from most recent to least) made to the thread and nothing more.


    11/06/2017

    -Fixed issues.

    -Added Fell to Hitlist.

    -Edited Changelog.


    10/26/2017

    -Edited Demo 01.

    -Edited Storyline.
    Last edited by FalconX578; 11-06-2017 at 04:19 PM. Reason: Please view Recent Changes and Edits/Changelog for more details :D .
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    wRHG: Farukon.
    wRHG Test Room: The Birdcage.
    Forums/SE Username: FalconX578.
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    Spoiler for spoiler:


    It is okay they were confusing when I started too.

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    Thank you so much, this really helps.

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    No problem I like helping.

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    If anyone has a constructive criticism, please let me know, I would like to hear what you ppl have to say about my writing and would love to hear how I can make it better!

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    Give them some time trust me they will come. Be prepared for all the CnC.

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    It's almost Christmas, so most CnC may have to wait. I personally don't have any problems with your character though you might want to reconsider his appearance. He doesn't have to be a stick figure. Here in the written version of RHG, he can take any appearance you want him to. Most of us choose to be more realistic in terms of appearance (like a human, robot, etc) instead of stick figures just to let you know. However, if you want him to remain a stick figure, I think people will be okay with it.

    I might critique your demo some time soon as well since your character seems pretty decent to me.
    Last edited by Urako; 12-23-2016 at 11:05 PM.
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    Other than the previously mentioned appearance, I like Farukon! He's a pretty cool character in my opinion and I like the concept of the wings. Riley might have to keep an eye on this guy...

    If this was an RHG, then the stick figure part of the appearance would make sense, but if you need some reference, you can check out my guy in my signature. You described his real world appearance pretty well, but you could probably get rid of the stick figure part. Though if you don't want to you don't have to.
    Last edited by IgnusBurns; 12-24-2016 at 12:05 AM.
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    Merry (early) Christmas!
    Here's my two bits on Farukon, though it is my opinion that you should also ask the more experienced people on-site for CnC. O w O

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    I hope this helps. Welcome to the forums, and I hope to see you around often!

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