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Thread: Steam(Piston1937) VS Ethernu(Sharpiro)

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    Steam(Piston1937) VS Ethernu(Sharpiro)

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    Spoiler for Piston's part:


    Note from Piston : This was suppose to be put up before the battle with Azure but it wasn't.
    Last edited by Piston1937; 01-04-2017 at 08:14 PM.

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    Woah-woah-woah Steam. I think you should take your time and slow down on battles. First Ceil and now me? I didn't know you were that busy. Sorry for adding my battle to your to do list. You should tell others next time if your too busy.
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    "A leader is best when people barely know he exists, when his work is done, his aim fulfilled, they will say: we did it ourselves."
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    Oh it was nothing.

    Actually I was one straw away from breaking the camel's back.

    but it was fine.

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    you should update my battle part as I finished last minute edits. Also you spelled my name wrong in the poll choice. I don't think it matters too much but people might wonder who sparpiro is.
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    well I can't change it.

    Oh well it was a good fight lets do it again sometime maybe when I shift over to my next fighter.

    And now for my favorite question. "WHO HAS CnC?"
    Last edited by Piston1937; 01-04-2017 at 11:26 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Piston1937 View Post
    And now for my favorite question. "WHO HAS CnC?"
    And this is why I voted for you to be rookie of the year. Fairly good stories on both sides. Of course none are without flaws and here's the CnC you asked for Piston.
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    Not sure why I voted how I did but that's in the past now.
    Last edited by Urako; 01-04-2017 at 03:16 PM.
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    Thanks for the CnC and I will use it in upcoming battles.

    I can't wait to battle you and everyone else.

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    One more thing, you put my part as Mechanical Madness You should put my name next to to let others know who wrote it.

    Edit: I'm sorry If I am criticizing you so much but it for your own good in the future
    Last edited by Sharpiro; 01-04-2017 at 07:53 PM.
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    I understand.

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    I apologise for battling you at the same time as both Sharpiro and Azure. It did take quite the toll on your writing, and I should have known better orz. My sincerest apologies for that, Piston.

    As for this match, I found Sharpiro's work to be a little short. Not a bad thing, but it was quite abrupt. I'd have liked to see a little bit on what happened between Pupas and Ethernu, though. Also, something I noticed is that there's the occasional period missing at the end of sentences - nothing that a proofread won't solve. Everyone makes typing mistakes in any case.

    Piston's work has quite the improvement from the previous two battles. I agree with pretty much everything Urako said, and so I will not repeat. I do think that you could try giving the characters a little more depth (something that I don't really do much myself, admittedly). Just as Steam isn't always a drunk automaton.

    My vote goes to Sharpiro.

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