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Thread: Melox (plasmastick) vs Leoncio (Azure)

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    Melox (plasmastick) vs Leoncio (Azure)

    Second Leoncio battle, and Melox's first! CnC is always appreciated, and just to clarify, Melox is certainly not dead in my story.

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    Well that was a pretty good battle on both sides.

    Plasma spread out the story don't make the reader feel like he is wading into a swamp of words.

    And Where is the poll?

    So Urako what do you think?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Piston1937 View Post
    But still pretty good for a first battle(Taking on one of the high mid ranged writers is tough).

    And Where is the poll?
    1# So did you.
    2# I second the question. Where is the poll? Is this a spar?
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    Quote Originally Posted by Urako View Post
    1# So did you.
    -_- Yah.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Piston1937 View Post
    -_- Yah.
    Well as long as you had fun it doesn't matter.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Urako View Post
    Well as long as you had fun it doesn't matter.
    Yep and I want to go again after the queue of people Azure has challenged (Currently three as far as I know) has finished.

    But let's focus on giving Plasma CnC.(best thing for writers.)
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    Spoiler for for Plasmastick:

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    But let's focus on giving Plasma CnC.(best thing for writers.)
    You know you can try giving it to. All relevant and constructive input is valid even if it isn't always welcome by the writer.
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    I withheld the poll to make sure people had time to thoroughly read through both stories. It's there now.

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    Ah okay. thanks for explaining.


    Right my two cents for Plasma is.
    1) It felt thick. You want to spread out the story.
    2) Tad bit hard to follow sometimes.
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