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    ლ(ಠᨎಠლ) IgnusBurns's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Vern View Post
    You should know by now that this is one of my shorter critiques :P
    I DO know, but that was still quite a bit of reading.

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    Ignus~

    Yeah, Vern was definitely right. I mean, while I joke about the human thing with Altaer, you will notice that under weaknesses I literally wrote "None" aside from a couple notes about personality things.

    I will say that relating to the generic thing that Vern stated, here's my advice:

    My "human" char (Altaer) is fairly generic at his base (an assassin with endless weapons and gear and techy skills). I've turned him into something that -- whether people like him or not -- is definitely recognizable. I think the vanilla flavoring of Abbas is just something that comes with being a newly created human character. Once you write him regularly and get a feel for him I expect this to change (if it doesn't, THEN I'll come smack you. But not before).
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    Quote Originally Posted by Alphaeus View Post
    My "human" char (Altaer) is fairly generic at his base (an assassin with endless weapons and gear and techy skills). I've turned him into something that -- whether people like him or not -- is definitely recognizable. I think the vanilla flavoring of Abbas is just something that comes with being a newly created human character. Once you write him regularly and get a feel for him I expect this to change (if it doesn't, THEN I'll come smack you. But not before).
    Hmm, fair enough, I've written him before in some private stories, but I get what you're saying. I'm still trying to get somewhat of a feeling for him, but I have to he's one of my favorites so far. Thanks for the advice!

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    Quote Originally Posted by IgnusBurns View Post
    private stories
    we talkin that al x manny voodoo hentai shit in here n shit cus if so i'm all the way into that shit

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    Quote Originally Posted by Chromium7 View Post
    we talkin that al x manny voodoo hentai shit in here n shit cus if so i'm all the way into that shit
    Chrome why...

    No, I mean it's Abbas' chronicles of what he did before he met Riley and Levi, no Hentai or any of that crap.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Chromium7 View Post
    we talkin that al x manny voodoo hentai shit in here n shit cus if so i'm all the way into that shit
    I thought Zalgo was the one with a hard-on for Al, Chromy. Slime hentai and all that, ya dig?
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    All of you just stop posting the most random crap possible on my thread...

    PLEASE...

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    I can do that. It wasn't my intention to derail, just curious as to what's going on behind the scenes here. So you say you've tested out some stories with Macbeth in them, and I feel like Alph vaguely mentioned something about this before, so may as well just ask it outright- you tryna join the Coils?

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    Yes. We're starting the joining collab tomorrow, and if you look on Altaer's char page you'll find the fused-canon version of our last battle.
    My wRHG Char: The Fixer
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    Alright, it's been a well over a week since you guys have seen me, and the Lion in me is desperately hungry, you know what that means?

    I AM BACK IN BUSINESS!

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