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Thread: (Rudy) [Speedy Old Man]

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    Animator/YouTuber/Gamer MrRe1gn's Avatar
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    (Rudy) [Speedy Old Man]

    RUDY

    Made by ACFH

    Abilities:
    1. His movements are very quick
    2. He is a hard target to hit, even when shooting him, you could miss
    3. He got a
    Bloodlust ability that increase his movement speed when bloods are on him or he's bleeding

    Weakness:
    1. His age makes it hard for him to move freely
    2. He can't activate
    Bloodlust when there's no blood

    Story:
    It was the year 1957, he's an experiment from a secret 1st class
    Blacklab, a lab that's secretly powerful and using humans as a "Subject". A simple mistake could lead to the biggest disaster and that's what happened to Rudy, an unknown fluid flowed to his blood and connected to it. Changed Rudy's color and by the time he's awake, everything seems too slow to him, like the time have stopped, so he took that advantage and run away. After years passed, he mastered the speed control and the Bloodlust abilities in hundreds, or maybe thousands of matches that he fought. Learned things what to do and what's not. Still, he wanted to fight, and his age can't stop him just like that.

    Personality:

    A good looking old guy, he smiled to almost everyone, become interested when there's someone wanted to fight him.
    Aged
    60+

    Weapon:
    Locked-
    HookChain

    Clan:
    Oxymoron

    Demo:
    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=EImiCmE8ytk
    Lack of SFX

    Battles:
    \None/

    Points Win/Lose:
    0/0


    Availability:
    No, I'm not

    ~Hitlist~


    Last edited by MrRe1gn; 06-05-2017 at 01:18 PM.

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    definately an improvement, the presentation is a lot better, there are some grammar mistakes here and there but they're not as bad as your last one, anyways, great inprovement lad

    kys hahahhahha xdd :/
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    tell me the mistakes pls, I felt like there's something wrong too....

    Thanks!

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    This is top notch compared to the other. Although, you don't really need to make "he is hard to hit" and " he is very fast" In different areas, if someone has extreme speed you'd expect them to be hard to hit lol. Otherwise it's just the grammar mistakes.
    kill me


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    1. His movement are very quick
    *His movements are very quick
    2. He is a hard target to hit, even shooting him, you could miss
    *He is a hard target to hit, even when shooting him, you could miss.
    3. He got a Bloodlust abilities that increase his movement speed when bloods are on him or he's bleeding
    *He has a Bloodlust ability that increases his movement speed when blood is on him or when he is bleeding.
    1. His age makes him hard to move freely
    His age makes it hard for him to move freely.
    2. He can't active Bloodlust when there's no blood
    He can't activate Bloodlust when there's no blood.

    I went through your powers and weaknesses and fixed all the mistakes I could find.
    Also
    His age makes him hard


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    Thx for correcting, Xyskal!!
    Last edited by MrRe1gn; 06-04-2017 at 07:48 AM.

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    Oh mate. This is quite the improvement. I like it. Add me to that hitlist.
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    As you wish!!

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    Nice m8 on the new RHG, other than the grammar which has been pointed out already, this is all good stuff. Major improvement from your last RHG.






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    thx man!!

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