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  • The Viking (PitchEnder)

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  • The Tree Hugger (GreekGladiator)

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Thread: Fell (PitchEnder) vs The Elementalist (GreekGladiator)

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    The Stickpage Ghost PitchEnder's Avatar
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    Fell (PitchEnder) vs The Elementalist (GreekGladiator)

    Who will come out on top?

    Today's battle is between two powerful gladiators: Fell, the Mean Lean Viking Machine, and Jason, the True Father of the Earth!

    CnC is always appreciated for both stories, which you can find below!

    PitchEnder:
    Spoiler for One Hell of a Show:


    GreekGladiator:
    Spoiler for Worthy:
    Last edited by PitchEnder; 11-06-2017 at 09:17 AM.

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    Just better than you GreekGladiator's Avatar
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    Let's see how this goes. Finally after nearly two months my first battle!

    EDIT: Pitch you have to make the link public. It currently requires for you to request permission to view from Google Docs.
    Last edited by GreekGladiator; 11-04-2017 at 03:35 PM.
    My wRHG: The Elementalist
    Have fun everybody!
    Spoiler for Truth:

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    Quote Originally Posted by GreekGladiator View Post
    Let's see how this goes. Finally after nearly two months my first battle!

    EDIT: Pitch you have to make the link public. It currently requires for you to request permission to view from Google Docs.
    I just checked. Both of the links are the "anyone with the link can view" link.

    WRHG: Fell

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    Character will be changed after I'm finished with my next two battles.

    I'm a skeleton IRL.


    Spoiler for Gif Of My Mascot:

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    Just better than you GreekGladiator's Avatar
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    I recommend people to read my story from Docs because there it has all the different fonts and stuff that I put. In this thread, although the text was copied, the things like italice or bold fonts weren't transfered.

    EDIT: Still unable to enter through Gdocs. I requested permission though
    Last edited by GreekGladiator; 11-04-2017 at 03:59 PM.
    My wRHG: The Elementalist
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    EDIT: The formatting for the In Thread version of Greek's story has been edited to closely resemble the Google Docs version.

    EDIT EDIT: The Gdocs link is fixed.
    Last edited by PitchEnder; 11-04-2017 at 05:09 PM.

    WRHG: Fell

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    Character will be changed after I'm finished with my next two battles.

    I'm a skeleton IRL.


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    Just better than you GreekGladiator's Avatar
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    Seriously. What two days have passed? One and a half? And yet nobody has even voted. This is both hilarious and sad.
    My wRHG: The Elementalist
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    Skimmed through both of the stories real quick.

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    Quote Originally Posted by GreekGladiator View Post
    Seriously. What two days have passed? One and a half? And yet nobody has even voted. This is both hilarious and sad.
    Patience is a virtue

    WRHG: Fell

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    Character will be changed after I'm finished with my next two battles.

    I'm a skeleton IRL.


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    For a battle with no votes this surely is a busy thread.

    Anyways, vote goes to Pitch. Both stories could be better in many ways. Pitch's suffers from a complete lack of tension or life. It just reads like a battle that sort of happens, any kind of dialogue is filled to the brim with exposition. The lack of time invested really shows here.

    Greek's starts off with a bit more colour and life to it and I certainly appreciate that, however all tension in this piece is manufactured. Fell acts very out of character. I imagine if I were Fell and I had an idiot like Jason following me, I'd just put up my middle finger, sit down at the bar and get myself a drink and not give a fuck. Here, though, Fell falls for the most predictable, cliché'd insults even though falling for such insults goes against his character, then follows a fight that's just as plain as the one in Pitch's battle and then Fell goes "Oh I really underestimated your power you're so strong and big and strong" and I roll my eyes.

    So yeah that's why Pitch gets my vote. I'll do a proper, in depth critique later.

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    my vote goes to pitch though both were engaging stories though i have to say that pitch's was just that much more engaging.
    Though it be dark there shall always be a light. You just have to look for it. ^_^

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