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  • Fireflygoddess

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  • Sh@dowcore

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Thread: Serena vs Obzidias

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    Goddess of Fireflies fireflygoddess's Avatar
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    Serena vs Obzidias

    Here is the battle between me and Sh@dowcore. I hope you people enjoy and vote fairly.

    Sh@dowcores battle

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    My battle

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    Though it be dark there shall always be a light. You just have to look for it. ^_^

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    Senior Member Urako's Avatar
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    This is a really close one but I'm going to have to go with Fireflygoddess because Sh@dowcore more multiple people's dialogue into single paragraphs so his story was a tad harder to follow.

    Sorry I don't have time for a proper CnC. That was the deciding factor for me though.
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    Oh hey, a fight!

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    Great work, you two!

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    Let's throw my two cents in, although my cents are worth 0.00000000001 of your cents.

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    I don't really have to say much more and I think Crank summed it up pretty well. I voted for Sh@dowcore since I felt the battle was better potrayed in his version although both were very good. I felt like both stories were kinda sort, although this could be entirely on me, since I don't really know what to expect unlike other seasoned writers around here(wink wink).
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    Goddess of Fireflies fireflygoddess's Avatar
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    So thank you for the complements but as for any my story was short well time constraints also I work full time. As for Sern well cut content
    Though it be dark there shall always be a light. You just have to look for it. ^_^

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    I thank you GreekGladiator and frankly I am trying to improve my writing technique. I have to since my fanfic account relies on it. But I am glad you think that my portrayal of the fight was better, I pride myself on trying to describe the fight as epically (word?) and easily understandable as possible, despite the rather mixed FOVs. As for the criticisms, yeaaaaaah. I may have went over my head, but to me it's easily understandable. Chaos is my element. :P But I will try to separate them as much as I can in the future. Also there aren't that many voters are there?
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    Heh, yeah, ya kinda caught us near flat-line. This might be our heartbeat for a while

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    Quote Originally Posted by SH@D0WC0RE View Post
    I thank you GreekGladiator and frankly I am trying to improve my writing technique. I have to since my fanfic account relies on it. But I am glad you think that my portrayal of the fight was better, I pride myself on trying to describe the fight as epically (word?) and easily understandable as possible, despite the rather mixed FOVs. As for the criticisms, yeaaaaaah. I may have went over my head, but to me it's easily understandable. Chaos is my element. :P But I will try to separate them as much as I can in the future. Also there aren't that many voters are there?
    Sorry for responding so late(I saw this twelve hours ago).

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    As for the voters thing, the way I see it, some people don't have the time or will to read the stories(me most of the times), or don't see it, since not everyone checks for any update every few hours(like me) or for some other reason, end up not voting. This is also why the deadline is so long. I believe the average is 5-8 votes every battle(out of my ass), so don't get underwhelmed by the amount of voters at the first couple of days. Give it some time
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    Senior Member Urako's Avatar
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    If it helps, I haven't had too much activity on my later battles either. I remember getting two votes and no replied aside from me my opponent on one.
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    King of Dark Glass SH@D0WC0RE's Avatar
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    Welp I lost.
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