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Thread: Yoghurt!

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    Yoghurt!

    Real Name:*<Jonata Widjaya>

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    so... this is my written rhg character,please tell me what u guys think!!

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    First off, don't double post unless you have an important update or you're in certain areas (i.e Q & A or one of the games in the lounge). Otherwise, I really like this guy. He doesn't seem to OP, he seems really unique, and all around fun guy to fight. It has so much in common with my guy though that I might one day challenge you.

    If I may ask though, how old is he right now?
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    Here is my wRHG character Dozer!

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    Wow uhhhh i never thought of an age
    but considering he has been in the team at the age 18
    i guess 20 ish years old

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    Can the ball absorb energy from all sources or just Yoghurt? My character uses a kinetic energy firing weapon and I'm curious to know if his weapon can absorb the shots.
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    Here is my wRHG character Dozer!

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    can the ball absorb energy from all sources?
    yes

    will yoghurt think of doing that?
    no

    yoghurt couldn't block projectiles cuz his ball is relatively small(about the size of his head),he will just run if that situation ever happens
    plus he can't actually control his takraw in battle without throwing or kicking it,Takraw acts like regular ball(except it floats beside him if he wasn't using it)

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    is there a reason you named him yoghurt

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    Now now. Step aside for the master writer.

    Hillarious jokes aside, I like the idea of your character. I like how he isn't OP and has a very interesting approach to battle. If I were still battling, I would definitely be the first to challenge you. Perhaps the biggest thing that bothers me, is that its kinda small. I believe you should flesh out the story and the demo a bit more, even if you don't have much to add. It will also help you learn to write bigger and better stories as time goes on. This is also a problem I usually meet: I have the idea perfect in my head, but I don't actually give the reader enough info to also picture it in their head.

    Anyway, good luck with your future writing! It's always nice to have new members around here.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Chromium7 View Post
    is there a reason you named him yoghurt
    funky name idea i guess?
    also he loved eating yogurt,so he nicknames himself after the tasty treat,but he mispronounced it as "yoghurt"

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    fuck yeah dude i love yogurt

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