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    like a party in ur pants Cizzil's Avatar
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    Suicidal

    I made this in class the other day, but rushed the ending since class was about to end, so yeah i know the ending sucks

    http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/vi....php?id=589917

    cc please

    EDIT: also, i had fixed it, but idk wut happened, the head disapears for a second.

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    expert at what? being black?

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    Work on the movements, easing, blood and effects from the gun shot.

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    The movements seemed jerky and unnartural. Plus there was one frame where his torso was missing.

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    i looked through it and the torso doesn't disapear, but i agree its jerky

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    expert at what? being black?

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