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Thread: my 2nd flash woop woop....

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    my 2nd flash woop woop....

    ok ppls.. for those who watched my previous(first) animation on flash.... this one is much better....

    you'll have to remove the spaces
    htt p:// ww w.anti up.net/files/9921 6123741battle%20swf.swf

    so this is my 2nd animation iv ever made... i did alot of experementing with this one... like i actually attempted explosions and smoke... and unfortunatly they look like crap... but hey its my first try at that stuff:heh:
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    http://www.antiup.net/files/99216123741battle%20swf.swf

    Wow, That was really good. At least, it was a lot better than mine. Keep it up!


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    Excellent work!

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    It's good, but pretty sloppy.
    Spoiler for :

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    To tell the truth that was really shitty, sloppy, and pretty much retarded. why is their spaces in the link?

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    Because he doesn't have enough posts...isn't that obvious? Anyway, he could've only put one space there...

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    seriously i dont really mind if you call it a worthless pile of shit but im still learning with flash so if anyone has some tips on how to improve flashwork id be happy to listen
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    Never use rubber tool for explosions.
    Make your sticks look better.
    Easing.
    Physics.
    Make your particles last longer.
    Draw your sticks slowly so they dont get wobbly.
    More particles.
    More detailed background.


    Hmm... I think that's everything you have to work on.
    AH SHIT

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    lol ok ty ill keep that in mind
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    Wow sweet.. I liked it. nice music btw

    My second looks like shit compared to yours

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