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Thread: RawGreen's tea break >.>

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    RawGreen's tea break >.>

    a rather crappy attempt to speed animate, I wanted to play with effects and colors too. I see it's uneased and sorta sloppy, but I wanna know what you all think. I used duo tones on the sticks.

    I made this out of some boredom and I wasn't up for adding onto my mania. The mania file went corrupt and I had to decompile and fix all the tweens that weren't moving right and all that other spazz.

    http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/vi...d.php?id=55827

    how can I improve?

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    You need more easing and less different frames, because although it looks fine fbf it doesnt flow while playing.

    Also, the back leg lifts one frame too early in the run at the start.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Bonk View Post
    You need more easing and less different frames, because although it looks fine fbf it doesnt flow while playing.

    Also, the back leg lifts one frame too early in the run at the start.
    eh, yeah, not oo bad for 2 hours but I've sorta spotted that out already <3

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