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Thread: little bit of improvement...

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    Veteran Member Kieran.'s Avatar
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    little bit of improvement...

    well... over the past couple of days I have been working on these two animations... I am a beginner so constructive criticism is appreciated... thanks! both are at 18fps

    1.) double punch test

    http://www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=80766



    2.) getting hit.... (can be assed about the head..)

    http://www.truploader.com/view_upload.php?id=808672

    extremekd

    >:~0

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    Yeah now where is the improvement?

    Work on your anticipation, on the first, the stick looked gay like he was a whiney bitch with this arm pulled to his head.
    Also, both of the animation needs more easing.
    On the second animation the stick felt way too fast, add more frames in the beginning of the fall and make the impact look dramatic.

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    k, thanks for the tips..

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