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Thread: Sword VS Man

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    Forever 9 years old Apples's Avatar
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    Dec 2005
    Canada, Ontario

    Sword VS Man
    Just a quick thing I whipped up.

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    And lol im no noob for saying that!
    it really was awesome the Smoothness and all.

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    Senior Member Etch's Avatar
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    Oct 2007
    Memphis, TN
    Hmm, i personally didn't like the slash when it inverted or blacked out. But the head was cool.

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    Custom User Title LN3uq's Avatar
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    Dec 2004
    The head bounced too many times at the end, for being on such a soft surface.
    Nice looking overall though

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    I really liked the shape of the blood when it went negative, but I didn't like the end stance so much. Overall really good. BTW is there an actual button for negative or do you have to fill with the bucket?

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    The above name is gay. Kitsune's Avatar
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    May 2006
    Erie Pa
    Your motions were well done. Fluent and all. The only blood I saw was during the shadow, which was sort of awkward to see just disappear. If you mean it to be a strike mark in the dark, you may want some entering motion onto it. Maybe a rip. If it's blood, after the shadow, you may want the blood to literally explode while the shadow is off.

    The shadow also comes a bit too instantly. it even makes my screen skip a little in the color difference. Maybe fading quickly into the shadow, in 2 or 3 frames would work. Just like easing in a motion, easing in darkness could work in the same pattern.

    Keep it up. Nice work!
    [please note i dont usually read the other comments in a thread before posting advices]
    demo reel:

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    Senior Member kinto's Avatar
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    Feb 2007
    In ****ing New York
    What Kitsune said. Make the blood fall or splatter even after the shadow flashes.

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    bacon man
    I liked it, the head bouncing was funny.

  9. #9
    I'm all for realistic physics but whats the fun in that? heads bouncing 9 times is cool. >=I

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