The thing is, I'm a living, breathing, character creation library. Just for the sake of not overloading a general zone with ME, I've decided to make my thread separate, if it's alright. A couple of my characters may appear on the Vague City People and Places section, if it's approved, but I feel like I need a separate section that is exclusively dedicated to my creations. Oh, and I would really enjoy CNCs.
Beware...once my NPC thread has been made, it'll probably be flooded with more-than-a-year's-worth of profiles.
@IgnusBurns: I'm pretty sure his character was accepted after the latest modification. I can't be certain though until I see the page.
I was implying that my character is perfectly fine, thanks for asking.
Spoiler for but never mind:
I am a quality shitposter(and Magnificent Bastard). You, on the other hand, are a shit-quality poster.
Spoiler for Writing Motto:
Spoiler for me:
(made a wRHG)
(wants to join a clan for the time being)
Spoiler for That said:
Now if you want to talk specific archetypes or you have a vision of a character that you want made feasible, feel free to PM me or someone else who's willing to help. There's a lot of nice people willing to help and they probably have a better since of balance than me.
Edit: I just realized you were talking about writing in general and not characters. I feel like a total idiot now, but i'm still keeping this up in case someone else can get use from it. Your basic writing skills a very good by the way so you should be fine. Just try to learn from reading other people and take CnC.
Last edited by Urako; 04-19-2017 at 10:18 PM.
Going by your demo I like your style, but as far as the fights go, give them a reason, make them matter and don't be afraid to make them more than just a fight. Most people prefer to have some storyline between the blows, so don't be afraid to have a bit before and after the action. Character development is also always a plus. If you can get into their heads and show what they're thinking, good
My character is a bit on the weak side for a few reasons(going for a slightly more "realistic" tone), but I guess if he can beat opponents in a logical way, even if it does happen to involve a lot of luck, it doesn't matter hugely.
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