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Thread: Lucario "The Blue Brawler"

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    Lucario "The Blue Brawler"

    Name: Lucas Parker/Rio.

    AKA: Lucario the Blue Brawler. (Nick: Luke) (Note: Nobody likes being called his real name, so stick with Lucario)

    Gender: Male/Male.

    Age:18 years old.

    Abilities/Weakness:

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    Limit Break:
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    Key Items:
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    Personality:
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    Appearance:
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    Story:
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    Demo:
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    History:
    Friendly battle with Bl.An.C.-Loss
    wRHG Tournament R1: vs Bl.An.C.-Loss
    Fairy Tale Battle Royale Entry

    Ongoing projects:
    Jesse's tournament.
    Saul's tournament.
    Fight with L.L.Bust.
    Fight with Kalena.
    Clan war.

    Points: (Wins/Losses/Draws/Forfeits)
    0/1/0/0

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    Last edited by Xate; 08-03-2014 at 12:15 AM.
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    Better get the story and demo up fast. Btw this reminds me of lucario from Pokemon (the name, TMs and aura sphere)
    It seems pretty good so far though.
    Are theme songs the new "thing"? Lol
    I respect Hewitt.
    I made a wRHG, thanks Hewitt for inspiring me to write. Here is my wRHG, Fr0st, the Frozen Archer.

    SEXY ARCHIDON!


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    A good character! But I am a little confused here; so Lucas and Rio are like two seperate ego?
    I am looking forward to see your story and demo :3
    wRHG - Pluto
    Dies? :3

    Call me Pluto as you will
    I'm no planet but I can twirl!

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    Nice wRHG. The theme song wouldn't come up because my computer keeps saying its a "POTENTIAL DANGER TO MY COMPUTER AND SOCIETY", it seriously told me in that exact form with those exact words, nowhere near joking.

    Oh well still an awesome wRHG (I suggest looking up the theme song in youtube so other people can listen to it)

    I suggest fighting Luther Wright when you believe your good enough, the two fighters would be quite a battle.

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    Quote Originally Posted by DragonFrost View Post
    Better get the story and demo up fast.
    wRHG unlocked, have fun writing :3
    Last edited by Luzoto; 04-09-2013 at 07:57 PM.

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    Holy crap!!! Did you animate those?! I loved the first one! About to see the other two

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    Quote Originally Posted by ChamelNeon View Post
    Holy crap!!! Did you animate those?! I loved the first one! About to see the other two
    1. I'm pretty solid sure by Constructive Criticism, he meant his wRHG. Why jump into writing first thing if you have good animation skills?
    2. Keep the subject on the topic of the wRHG, please.

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    Um, guys? Anyone mind checking my wRHG? Constructive criticism needed. Thanks.
    PS: Can anyone give a color for Lucas? Can't think of a good one. Also, how can I improve my Story/Demo?
    Last edited by Xate; 07-01-2014 at 12:32 PM.
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    Lucas, Rio. Lucario. OH I GEDDIT NOW. I'm so slow. ._.
    Anyways, nice wRHG. One of the few people who decided to do a schizo, so kudos to you. Unless you don't view him as a schizo. o_O
    Um... you have a few grammar and punctuation errors here and there, you should proof-read your post.

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    The wRHG itself is creative. I remember another wRHG with a sort of split personality, your battle with him would have been nice to read.
    Also, add spaces between your paragraphs to avoid it becoming a block of text. I agree with Saf. Proof-read. It's a writer's best friend.



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