Gurren Lagann Viral

[Zultin]

So i had just finished watching Gurren Lagann (an anime) and decided to draw my favourite character
Here it is , Not much

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CnC Pl0x

[PUMU]

That's nice. I like it. I haven't watched that anime. But it's fancy though

[Zultin]

Thank you

[Chamel]

Okay... Let's see here...

1. The proportions of the body seem off. It seems like the limbs are way too long and disproportionate.
2. What's with the curvy line on the forearm...? It doesn't need to be there. People usually put those there to signify the muscle there, but in all actuality, it isn't needed (in most cases, including this one)
3. The torso seems oddly shaped, like an upside down pear..
4. The fist, it just doesn't look natural. Probably because the thumb isn't supposed to lay like that (?). Look up some tuts on how to correct that shit
5. The other hand, with the necklace hanging off of it, looks like he's flipping everything off, and the necklace seems to be floating there.

Oh well~ Look up tuts on hands, that's it

[Zultin]

Okay... Let's see here...

1. The proportions of the body seem off. It seems like the limbs are way too long and disproportionate.
2. What's with the curvy line on the forearm...? It doesn't need to be there. People usually put those there to signify the muscle there, but in all actuality, it isn't needed (in most cases, including this one)
3. The torso seems oddly shaped, like an upside down pear..
4. The fist, it just doesn't look natural. Probably because the thumb isn't supposed to lay like that (?). Look up some tuts on how to correct that shit
5. The other hand, with the necklace hanging off of it, looks like he's flipping everything off, and the necklace seems to be floating there.

Oh well~ Look up tuts on hands, that's it

1. i guess they do.
2.I was actually in doubt about that line there
3.I dont see how you think the torso looks like an upsidedown pear
4.hands are one of my biggest problems with human anatomy
5.i tried making the necklace hanging from the tip of his finger but it just looks like he is flipping off. yeah. thats it

[Drone]

Watch tutorials dude,
There's too much wrong with this for it to be properly cncd

[Lethal]

so yeah. nice drawing but there's a lot of things that i kinda don't like >.> anyways i'll give you my cnc (shit man because i suck at cnc and i don't watch this anime. but whatever, oh and i know this doesn't look like a cnc, it's more like an opinion lol.).

[[ONE]]
wtf. where is he looking? i opened the image in new tab and zoomed it on his eyes but his eyes are weird. seriously. try drawing carefully and everything will be good.

[[TWO]]
his fist, just like what chamel said, the thumb should not lay off like that. but don't worry, you're still a rookie and you still need practice c:

[[THREE]]
why is his body curved? i don't like it lol. it's like he is falling off or anything else that comes in other's mind.

[[FOUR]]
his body, i mean his torso? i think i find it a little weird, it's like a rectangle body but covered with clothes (lol. i don't know, i think this is just my opinion lol.)

[[FIVE]]
his shoulder is a little high isn't it? try lowering it a bit and it will be fine.

that's all i can give, sorry if it's bad but yeah, i'm currently practicing in cnc'ing. good job though and hope you get better in drawing c:

[Zultin]

Watch tutorials dude,
There's too much wrong with this for it to be properly cncd

Well then

so yeah. nice drawing but there's a lot of things that i kinda don't like >.> anyways i'll give you my cnc (shit man because i suck at cnc and i don't watch this anime. but whatever, oh and i know this doesn't look like a cnc, it's more like an opinion lol.).

[[ONE]]
wtf. where is he looking? i opened the image in new tab and zoomed it on his eyes but his eyes are weird. seriously. try drawing carefully and everything will be good.

[[TWO]]
his fist, just like what chamel said, the thumb should not lay off like that. but don't worry, you're still a rookie and you still need practice c:

[[THREE]]
why is his body curved? i don't like it lol. it's like he is falling off or anything else that comes in other's mind.

[[FOUR]]
his body, i mean his torso? i think i find it a little weird, it's like a rectangle body but covered with clothes (lol. i don't know, i think this is just my opinion lol.)

[[FIVE]]
his shoulder is a little high isn't it? try lowering it a bit and it will be fine.

that's all i can give, sorry if it's bad but yeah, i'm currently practicing in cnc'ing. good job though and hope you get better in drawing c:

Hm Thanks for the opinion ill take your advice into mind.
I always sucked at making human anatomy thats hwy i dont really draw humans. but i gotta learn sometime i guess :P