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Thread: Dracustos the Draconian

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    Lotus Petal Storm zoomxoom's Avatar
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    My criticism is just a little somethin somethin to help make reading this a little bit easier. Lets start with the powers

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    Next, I'll talk about the weapons (This one will be short, so I'm not gonna give it a spoiler).

    Weapons CnC: I like your weapon choice, it's definitely a little bit different, which I see as a good thing. I also like the bit about him not using weapons against an unarmed opponent, cool. Overall, weapons are looking pretty sound.

    Weaknesses CnC: I don't have much to really critique about this one either, it looks sound, interesting weaknesses, keeping the character rounded, I like it.

    In fact, everything else looks pretty sound, and I really like the character, and look forward to seeing you on the battlefield. IN FACT, I'm looking forward to seeing him in action so much that I will leave you with this:

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    "I may one day be the king of all lands. I may one day be the master of all trades. I may one day be the greatest warrior, capable of slaying even the mighty gods. I may one day become a god. No matter what I become, never will I be any less mortal than a beggar.
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    Quote Originally Posted by zoomxoom View Post
    A few questions about his powers though. First, how much hotter than standard fire is the light blue fire? Second, fire can pretty much already burn earth and stone anyways, so I don't see much of a point in the brown fire. Third, you don't state that he can use normal fire, unless I just missed it in my reading, so can he use normal fire? Fourth, does going full dragon mode affect the strength of his fire attacks?
    The super-heated fire is hot enough to melt most metals. The reason for the brown fire is fire needs fuel other than oxygen to burn, which is hard on plain ground and stone. Given he is half dragon, I thought it was obvious he could use plain fire. His Full Dragon form does not effect the strength of his fire attacks.
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    Since I know very well that you're still active and that you're using this character, I think I'll shamelessly bump this so that I can easily reference it for...
    OUR GLORIOUS AND EPIC COMBAT.
    That is all.
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    Damn! This is cool. Also, it is freakily close to my char's abilities, when it comes to the beast part (though at the same time entirely different, which is a good thing). Needless to say, I love it. Since the CnC has already been taken care of, I only have to second ZoomXoom.
    If you accepted his challenge, I'd like to call shotgun. In other words, I'd like to fight you next. I think a battle between our chars would be freakin' awesome!

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    Cool WRHG. and... I don't have any CNC. for you... at the moment.
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    Cool concept man, as much as I love dragons, gotta say I really like Draco's concept and design. Nicely done.

    Could you add me to your hitlist? Don't put Riley down as my wRHG cause I'm pretty sure it'll change by the end of this week.

    EDIT: Actually, I'm ashamed to say it but I never actually ready through your entire wRHG, but I'm glad I have now.
    Last edited by IgnusBurns; 03-27-2017 at 10:03 AM.
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    Am I Available For Battle? Nope

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    Quote Originally Posted by IgnusBurns View Post
    Cool concept man, as much as I love dragons, gotta say I really like Draco's concept and design. Nicely done.

    Could you add me to your hitlist? Don't put Riley down as my wRHG cause I'm pretty sure it'll change by the end of this week.

    EDIT: Actually, I'm ashamed to say it but I never actually ready through your entire wRHG, but I'm glad I have now.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Urako View Post
    You people do realize this profile has been here for a while right?
    Yeah, I know. I just never took the time to actually look through it is all.
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    Quote Originally Posted by IgnusBurns View Post
    Could you add me to your hitlist? Don't put Riley down as my wRHG cause I'm pretty sure it'll change by the end of this week.
    Done.
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    His blade defends the helpless
    His might upholds the weak
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    His wrath undoes the wicked

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    Quote Originally Posted by IgnusBurns View Post
    man
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