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    Senior Member TheBestG's Avatar
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    practice #2

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    i like the way you did the running but when it came to the jumping i think there should have been a bit more leg bending. other than that i think its great.

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    Quote Originally Posted by notthebest View Post
    i like the way you did the running but when it came to the jumping i think there should have been a bit more leg bending. other than that i think its great.
    thanks next time i will try to do it better
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    ROCK ON, YOU GUYS! >:O Phantom Ace's Avatar
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    Looks like you just copied the frames. Well that is alright. Though the loop did'nt switch hands and legs. Which make it looks like he's just repeating instead of looping the run. Fix that part. The jumping part was'nt that bad. Though it looked like he was just levitating instead of jumping(for me). Maybe add some force on those jumps?

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    dirty narcoleptic whore Damian's Avatar
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    Besides what has already been mentioned, the stick visibly slows down as soon as he reaches the blocks and loses all momentum, which is weird given that he looked like he was in quite a hurry. Try practicing flowing from one movement to another.

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