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    .: Zack :. - [BATTLING xRAGEx]

    Zack





    Color: #990000


    Abilities

    Control/Create fire
    Summon his sword
    Can't be killed by fire, heat, ...


    Weakness

    Human weakness (except fire... of course lol)


    Weapon: Sword



    Can turn into a Demon and fight for Zack
    The Demon is really strong and quite fast
    Demon's color: #FF0000
    Demon's weakness: Water.


    About

    His family were killed since he was a child. He always want to revenge. ( I'm worst story teller D: ).


    Demo

    First Demo


    Clan

    EXECUTIONER - Leader


    Availability

    No, battling xRAGEx


    Battle

    None


    Hitlist

    Ipman
    EclairCat


    Point

    0/0/0


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    dat face lol

    I love it!
    the fire effect are great!
    your story was 2 sad 4 me (DONT FUCKINGGG CRYYY ;_____; )
    put me in yur Hitlist :< we gonna have some fun later!

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    Quote Originally Posted by EclairCat View Post
    dat face lol

    I love it!
    the fire effect are great!
    your story was 2 sad 4 me (DONT FUCKINGGG CRYYY ;_____; )
    put me in yur Hitlist :< we gonna have some fun later!
    THANKS M8 !!! lol

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    Haha fire is a human weakness haha I can pick up your guy and smash his skull into the ground and kill him in two seconds haha.

    Please, replace the generally assumed-to-already-be-there human weakness and put actual weaknesses in there. You have a guy who is able to control fire as a primary weakness and summon some sorta sword thing as a secondary. I like those powers, I do. I like how you added the power of him being unhurt by fire, it's a thing many people forget about these sort of things. I like that you paid attention to that. So, here's a good weakness. Water.

    Fire could be something that feels cool to him. That he can wash himself with, that he can drink. WATER could be the thing that burns him, that sears skin off his flesh. The colder, the worse.

    Also, I'm going to assume the demon thing isn't actually counted since it isn't in the powers list. If it WAS in the powers list I'd hate this guy like, a hundred times more lol.


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    Quote Originally Posted by WafflesMgee View Post
    Haha fire is a human weakness haha I can pick up your guy and smash his skull into the ground and kill him in two seconds haha.

    Please, replace the generally assumed-to-already-be-there human weakness and put actual weaknesses in there. You have a guy who is able to control fire as a primary weakness and summon some sorta sword thing as a secondary. I like those powers, I do. I like how you added the power of him being unhurt by fire, it's a thing many people forget about these sort of things. I like that you paid attention to that. So, here's a good weakness. Water.

    Fire could be something that feels cool to him. That he can wash himself with, that he can drink. WATER could be the thing that burns him, that sears skin off his flesh. The colder, the worse.

    Also, I'm going to assume the demon thing isn't actually counted since it isn't in the powers list. If it WAS in the powers list I'd hate this guy like, a hundred times more lol.
    thanks ! fixed XD
    i like water weekness but nah, he is a human and he needs water to live lol

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    Quote Originally Posted by maivanhuyhoang2000 View Post
    thanks ! fixed XD
    i like water weekness but nah, he is a human and he needs water to live lol
    Perhaps then you could make it into "water-element attacks"? Well, sure he can tolerate water but in combat situations a skilled water mage/bender would perforate him/

    Your animation is nice, I'll give you that.
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    Quote Originally Posted by maivanhuyhoang2000 View Post
    thanks ! fixed XD
    i like water weekness but nah, he is a human and he needs water to live lol
    The only character I know of in the past few months that ISN'T a human is mine.

    I say, replace the body's water needs with fire, and have water replace fire as a harmful thing.

    Also, I just realised that it's the sword that turns into a demon. God damnit.


    Honestly, human weakness is not a weakness list-viable weakness. It is weakness filler. Read my words, understand them. Human Weakness is not something you put in there. It is something true for every human character. And I'll know when a character isn't human. Because it'll SAY. You literally have nothing of any worth in your weakness list. It is an empty list.
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    Pretty rhg ya got mvhh.
    I liek it :3.
    Love the demo and dat face btw
    well hello there

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    Quote Originally Posted by WafflesMgee View Post
    The only character I know of in the past few months that ISN'T a human is mine.

    I say, replace the body's water needs with fire, and have water replace fire as a harmful thing.

    Also, I just realised that it's the sword that turns into a demon. God damnit.


    Honestly, human weakness is not a weakness list-viable weakness. It is weakness filler. Read my words, understand them. Human Weakness is not something you put in there. It is something true for every human character. And I'll know when a character isn't human. Because it'll SAY. You literally have nothing of any worth in your weakness list. It is an empty list.
    hmm... how about the demon can be hurt by water... sounds gud to me :P
    but i'll keep the human weakness sry lol

    Quote Originally Posted by GuardianTempest View Post
    Perhaps then you could make it into "water-element attacks"? Well, sure he can tolerate water but in combat situations a skilled water mage/bender would perforate him/

    Your animation is nice, I'll give you that.
    thanks !

    Quote Originally Posted by Lev View Post
    Pretty rhg ya got mvhh.
    I liek it :3.
    Love the demo and dat face btw
    lol, thanks m8 !!!

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    loving the demo, it was very smooth in my eyes! i hope to see a battle from you soon




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