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Thread: Practice: Combo with no reactions

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    Senior Member TheBestG's Avatar
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    Practice: Combo with no reactions

    I made this...CnC pliz

    http://thebestg07.deviantart.com/art...253A1427052860

    not good...
    but, I tried.
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    - First punch needs spacing for more force
    - The sweep kick looked weird because it happened too fast, or it wasn't eased.
    - Was that a double punch? or did he just switch hands twice?
    - The flip needs gravity and he didn't have enough momentum to do it, which made it odd.

    Everything else was nice after, keep improving man

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    Quote Originally Posted by Ipman View Post
    - First punch needs spacing for more force
    - The sweep kick looked weird because it happened too fast, or it wasn't eased.
    - Was that a double punch? or did he just switch hands twice?
    - The flip needs gravity and he didn't have enough momentum to do it, which made it odd.

    Everything else was nice after, keep improving man
    Thanks ipman!

    I know it was wierd. lol

    thx, I will try
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    IT'S MINE! BACK OFF! generalZ's Avatar
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    I find it a bit.... stiff? I dont really know... Plus, maybe you could add a double frame before or after a hit depending on what it is.
    In my opinion, harder hits should have a double frame before and smaller ones, like jabs, should have a double frame afterwards..... My opinion though.
    Also, after the first kick, the arm movement looks weird.....

    Though it is nice overall
    Keep going!



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    You mean anticipaion and easing right?
    yeah, I knew I could more of that

    thanks for the feedback!
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