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    DONE!!
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    Do CnC if you want, I could use some pointers, haven't written in a while.

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    CnC for IggyBarns:

    Good work overall, esp considering how short it is. My advice would be work on sentence variety -- you tended to start with "Riley did...The guard did...He did...they did...". You get my point. Also, noticed the wep change from the Beretta. Deagles are large, though I guess we already covered the whole beefy-arm deal. Just another note -- most modular weps do NOT assemble "quickly" like...say....in the middle of a battle. Is yours somehow just lego-snap-together? I haven't read your char profile yet to see if that's true.

    Again, all-in-all, great job.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Alphaeus View Post
    most modular weps do NOT assemble "quickly" like...say....in the middle of a battle. Is yours somehow just lego-snap-together? I haven't read your char profile yet to see if that's true.

    Again, all-in-all, great job.
    Thanks man! Yeah, on his char sheet it reads that each weapons comes in two pieces, the barrel and the handle, so yes, they snap together like Lego bricks... XD

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    Well, I have nothing to say to this except good job, man. Nothing except good job. As I'llpayus says, could have used some variation, but still really goddamn good imo.

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    Happy Birthday to the guy with the spy!

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    Quote Originally Posted by Crank View Post
    Happy Birthday to the guy with the spy!
    Happy Birthday Ignus, you've grown since your scrubby days.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Haru View Post
    Happy Birthday Ignus, you've grown since your scrubby days.
    I was pretty scrubby huh? Had a nice birthday, thanks for seeing it, guys.

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    Quote Originally Posted by IgnusBurns View Post
    I was pretty scrubby huh? Had a nice birthday, thanks for seeing it, guys.
    No problemo.

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    4 Months have past, and we are back.

    Disappearance

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    Quote Originally Posted by Haru View Post
    4 Months have past, and we are back.

    Disappearance
    YOOOOOOOOOO... That's awesome! I wish I could've helped... But I'm (Riley's) supposedly dead... Sooooo...

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