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Thread: Xal and Mr.Fluffykins

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    Heir of mediocrity Xyskal's Avatar
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    Xal and Mr.Fluffykins

    Xal and Mr.Fluffykins

    This was made by This guy.

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    Spoiler for Xal:



    Spoiler for Mr.Fluffykins:



    Spoiler for Weaknesses:


    Spoiler for story (This is long):


    Availability: No, I'm fighting an old friend.

    Spoiler for Demos/tryouts and weeklies:


    Spoiler for Hit-list.:






    Spoiler for Xal is a supporter of:






    Last edited by Xyskal; 06-01-2017 at 10:05 PM.

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    Jeez if you're going to type that much info, at least organize it with spoilers. >.>

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    Quote Originally Posted by Superterry View Post
    Jeez if you're going to type that much info, at least organize it with spoilers. >.>
    How do i do that?

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    Sephiroth? XD one winged angel o.o
    Add me on skype bruhh.. X3 Fran_holyX

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    Quote Originally Posted by FranLoL View Post
    Sephiroth? XD one winged angel o.o
    Lol no. I got the name from Tv tropes, but I came up with the main idea of the technique by myself. Maybe I subconsciously was inspired by Sephiroth though.... also, can i put you on my hitlist? I think our characters would make an interesting fight.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Xyskal View Post
    How do i do that?
    i use "[spoiler]This is a spoiler[/spoiler]" for spoilers without the quotes obviously. It's not bad to have a lot of info about your characters, but you should try add some colors, organize it to make it more pleasing for reading

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    I would agree with SuperTerry.

    The character is very interesting and sounds like it would be fun to animate, however the page, quite frankly, is unappealing.

    It's obvious you put in a lot of effort to the page, but people will be disinclined to read it all without proper organization. Having everything the same font in the same paragraph in big long sections makes me not want to read it at all. Quick lesson: The eye is attracted to things that stand out, such as larger letters, bolded text and coloured things. This is why newspapers enlarge the titles of important articles and why we highlight important parts in textbooks. Double spacing when changing sections is recommended, maybe changing the size, font and/or colour of your titles will really help stand out. You could even make or ask someone to create custom headers to really add personality. And of course, large branches of text should be put into spoilers. Your level of information is great, and like I said before, if you read through it it is obvious you put a lot of effort into it. Organization is just essential on pages you are wanting people to read.

    P.S. in order to create a spoiler you need to write this BBCode: [*spoiler="insert name here"*] insert text here [*/spoiler*] (remove *)

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    I don't mind reading in the same font but it is unappealing and most people would turn around. Also, i have a problem with one of your weaknesses.

    "While Xal's body is very blood efficent, having much more blood inside him than the average person, and Xal being able to lose 12 times as much blood as the average person before passing out, if Mr.Fluffykins gets too big based off only Xal's blood, Xal will pass out eventually."

    Woah there, maybe lower the amount?
    Spoiler for spoiler:

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    I second what drbrownca said. I literally don't even want to read through it when it's just that: "wall-o-texty". Keep in mind I'm not trying to be mean, I'm just suggesting better organization on the page so more people read it.

    good luck!

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