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    1 vs. ALL 1st and 2nd part.

    M9 F1rs Animation

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    alrighty, gatta tell ya, choppy af
    he kinda teleports his limbs to hit people instead of swinging them and it looked more like a slide show than an animation
    the part that did look good is when he lost balance and swung his arms in circles, the arms in that part looked good
    also, sound effects were either miss timed or poorly chosen
    the stock explosion look like out of place, but I can let that slide since you probably cant make your own yet
    also, I just dont get why a ladder came out of the ground

    in the second anim, not much to critizise on, since the guns didnt move much, how ever you did time the sound effects well, which is nice
    also, the blood and blur effects were great (that is, if you made them)
    however the sword and the small amount of character movement there was, was choppy like the first animation

    my suggestions are to:
    One. change to animating in 24 frames per second or around that area, as thats a commonly used frame rate, and for a good reason
    Two. Make sure the sticks move MUCH, MUCH, less per frame, to make it smooth
    Three. start learning to make effects, i know its hard af, I'm actually really bad with them, but its worth it, as the quality of your anims will go up with effects






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    You know what's really long? The dick I'm gonna stick in your nostril you lil cumbucket spitoon ass bitch.
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    Very Thanks 4 your suggestions

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    Quote Originally Posted by Vorpal View Post
    Yeah that's 5056 IFUKDURMOM drive, it's the house on the end and the road is a long one.
    Quote Originally Posted by Damian View Post
    You know what's really long? The dick I'm gonna stick in your nostril you lil cumbucket spitoon ass bitch.
    Quote Originally Posted by Vorpal View Post
    Will that be cash or credit?
    Quote Originally Posted by Damian View Post
    I'll take your food stamps card you broke crackwhore no-teeth having, giving gumjobs for a bump ass musty hag.

    Or just any card. Debit or Bredit works

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    m8 how i cAn MaK3 0r jo1n GroUp

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    The Universe In My Eyes Creepin_Bro's Avatar
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    what do you mean by group?






    Quote Originally Posted by Vorpal View Post
    Yeah that's 5056 IFUKDURMOM drive, it's the house on the end and the road is a long one.
    Quote Originally Posted by Damian View Post
    You know what's really long? The dick I'm gonna stick in your nostril you lil cumbucket spitoon ass bitch.
    Quote Originally Posted by Vorpal View Post
    Will that be cash or credit?
    Quote Originally Posted by Damian View Post
    I'll take your food stamps card you broke crackwhore no-teeth having, giving gumjobs for a bump ass musty hag.

    Or just any card. Debit or Bredit works

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    Group it's like your "ON THE TIP COLLAB"

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    The Universe In My Eyes Creepin_Bro's Avatar
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    thats not a group, i just put that in my signature to promote the On The top Collab
    which is a Collaborative Animation






    Quote Originally Posted by Vorpal View Post
    Yeah that's 5056 IFUKDURMOM drive, it's the house on the end and the road is a long one.
    Quote Originally Posted by Damian View Post
    You know what's really long? The dick I'm gonna stick in your nostril you lil cumbucket spitoon ass bitch.
    Quote Originally Posted by Vorpal View Post
    Will that be cash or credit?
    Quote Originally Posted by Damian View Post
    I'll take your food stamps card you broke crackwhore no-teeth having, giving gumjobs for a bump ass musty hag.

    Or just any card. Debit or Bredit works

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    oh sorry

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