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Thread: RHG: Spark

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    a guy Nultra Anims's Avatar
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    i like the demo bruh but his story didn't really make sence
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    You should improve the story. But you're talented, this demo is very smooth.

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    Your RHG must have plenty of things. Read the rules (its at the top of clan registry) and then restart your thread or just edit it. You can ask a moderator who is in charge of this typical forum. The story isn't much but I have faith that you can make your thread better ;3. Good luck on trying to fix it ;D

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    Heh, I like the guy due to his simplicity and how he looks like some Kingdom Rush character. GL on your future battles m9.

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    Your story could use sone work and You could add into jis weakness. Like how does the hook harm him? Shouldn't he be able to with stand electricity since he can use it to fight? Or does he just hurt himself everytime he uses it?
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    Yeah i know that the story is weak, but i was soooo tired when i did it :|

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    Quote Originally Posted by BillyTheKid7777777 View Post
    Like how does the hook harm him?
    If the enemy reflect/take his hook and throw at himself, he would get hurt

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    Quote Originally Posted by FlashAnimatorBR2 View Post

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    Spark

    Abilities:

    Thunder powers - Uses thuder powers
    Hook - Can both pull the enemy, use it to get to a high place or eletrocute the hook to harm the enemy

    Weakness:

    Hook itself - Use his hook at himself

    Demo:
    (no sound becussss idk)
    http://sta.sh/02f6x7w9yjuk

    Story:
    He was wandering around when he found a special scarf, and taken it

    Hit-List:
    None

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    0/0
    It's not that your story doesn't make sense.
    It's just that it seems you took no time on it. Add like at least 2 more sentences mebbe. Even if you are tired.
    And the weakness can be countered BECAUSE HE CAN ELECTROCUTE THE HOOK.

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    Junior Member FlashAnimatorBR2's Avatar
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    Quote Originally Posted by Haru View Post
    It's not that your story doesn't make sense.
    It's just that it seems you took no time on it. Add like at least 2 more sentences mebbe. Even if you are tired.
    And the weakness can be countered BECAUSE HE CAN ELECTROCUTE THE HOOK.
    Yeah ikr but i've updated the story

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    Color: #999999
    Spark
    Spoiler for :

    Spoiler for Weaknesses:

    Spoiler for Battle type:


    Demo:
    (no sound becussss idk)
    http://sta.sh/02f6x7w9yjuk

    Clan
    http://forums.stickpage.com/showthre...rs)-New-member

    Story:
    He was an Thunderbend kid, a day, his trainer has killed everyone from his old clan and escaped...
    But an day, Spark has found his trainer and fighted him
    Even if he was a kid, he defeated the trainer and become a pro in Thunderbend

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    Spoiler for Hitlist::


    Spoiler for Stats:


    Avaliability:
    Nope.

    Battles:
    Spark vs. Tetsu - LOST http://forums.stickpage.com/showthread.php?100462-Spark-vs-Tetsu

    Points:
    0/1
    Last edited by FlashAnimatorBR2; 11-27-2016 at 02:10 PM. Reason: AMOUNT of changes.
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