Shin-The one and only

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Aug 1, 2016 10:40 AM #1456664
Shin-The one and only

-Story:
Once upon a time there was a kid called Jay and he had a happy familly he lived in the woods and it was preety quiet at that time when he was 10
when he became 17 he went out with his friends in the city and did whatever they had to do and when he went back to his house..his parents were nowhere to be seen
so he swore on his life if he finds the people who stolethem he will avenge with any price
he found a weird chest in his house in it there was a message saying "this is for you son ~mom and dad" Shin cried and put it on he then became really powerfull somehow and he continued his journey on findig his family and saving the world


-Powers:electricity,mega blast,electric darts
he uses his mega gauntlet to do the mega blest same as with the other atacks
he has 2 forms
normal:he has his powers he is still really strong

Angry mode:he turns red and his deffense gets really high




-Strenght

Normal mode6/10 power
5/10 speed
6/10 health
6/10 defense

fight mode: 9/10 power
7/10 speed
8/10 health
10/10 defense

Personality-kind of funny when nothing is happening
but in battle he is very serious and never lets his mates down
if someone from the clan dies he swears on his life he will avenge
always focusing on a battle

Rhg Demo-


Shin-Image

weaknesses-he can lose electricity from his gauntlet in a fight
his gauntlet is kind of heavy
he can get electrified if he goes in water with his gauntlet enabled

i hope i did this correctly see ya ;););)
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Aug 1, 2016 11:23 AM #1456667
Hi, welcome to Stickpage. You should add a picture (150x150) and a demo. It's a good RHG, also.
'he realised those were the people who killed his family...' It's a good story, did you make a cliffhanger or it's unfinished ?
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Aug 1, 2016 12:06 PM #1456682
yeah its a cliff hanger anyways if you might not know i am actually a member of voidz
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Aug 1, 2016 12:38 PM #1456683
Member of Voidz ? I don't see your RHG in their thread.
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Aug 1, 2016 12:39 PM #1456684
i know because i am new to it haha
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Aug 1, 2016 12:53 PM #1456686
Hello, please add a demo.
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Aug 1, 2016 1:45 PM #1456696
i will i am just working on it
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Aug 1, 2016 7:23 PM #1456735
so does he control electricity with his mind or his white bracelet?
if it's both, then the bracelet is entirely redundant
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Aug 1, 2016 8:50 PM #1456741
Quote from Creepin_Bro
so does he control electricity with his mind or his white bracelet?
if it's both, then the bracelet is entirely redundant


true but maybe the bracelet amplifies his control.
shyku plz be more clear.
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Aug 2, 2016 3:03 AM #1456781
Gotta agree with Bro here, he's lacking detail.
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Aug 2, 2016 11:11 AM #1456813
without bands he can only control telkinesis the bands make him be able to control fire and electricity (red - fire) (white-electricity)
maybe you will understand in teh demo and sorry i forgot to put band's instead of bracelets i was really rushed about it and he controls telekinesis only with his mind
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Aug 2, 2016 11:25 AM #1456815
Quote from ShykuAnims
without bracelets he can only control telkinesis the bracelets make him be able to control fire and electricity (red - fire) (white-electricity)
maybe you will understand in teh demo and sorry i forgot to put band's instead of bracelets i was really rushed about it and he controls electricity with his mind


You just did it again

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without bracelets he can only control telkinesis the bracelets make him be able to control fire and electricity (red - fire) (white-electricity)


Quote from ShykuAnims
he controls electricity with his mind


these things contradict each other, does he use his bracelet or his mind for electricity?
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Aug 2, 2016 5:15 PM #1456833
Again we need details
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Aug 2, 2016 7:33 PM #1456839
Is this one those RHGs where their parents die for no reason? It would be better if there was and the story would be more clear
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Aug 2, 2016 10:28 PM #1456845
The "one and only" dude with
-Dead parents
-Demon super form
-Lightning and/or fire

Truly he is one of a kind.