Elang's Practice

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Aug 23, 2016 4:09 AM #1458646
Practice 1 =
I'm trying to make my feel for combo
5 combo - http://apielang.deviantart.com/art/Practice-7-629981761?ga_submit_new=10%253A1471924074
Time taken 3 hours
Really need CnC
Practice 2 =
I'm trying with block and enemy attack also try some silat style
http://apielang.deviantart.com/art/Practice-8-633435255
It took 4 hours, It's hard to make combo -.-
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Aug 24, 2016 3:01 AM #1458719
I'm too rusty to give any CNC
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Aug 24, 2016 12:26 PM #1458764
Quote from TheOrigin
I'm too rusty to give any CNC


It's okay, just give your opinion..
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Aug 24, 2016 12:59 PM #1458766
I think the head bending downwards right after the two punches is kinda unnecessary, maybe you could tilt him a bit back in a daze there? Apart from that, you did a nice job on it!
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Aug 25, 2016 7:50 AM #1458814
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I think the head bending downwards right after the two punches is kinda unnecessary, maybe you could tilt him a bit back in a daze there? Apart from that, you did a nice job on it!


Noted, Thank you. Will try to do better next time
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Aug 26, 2016 9:01 AM #1458922
One more thing I just noticed is that after being punched, the black stickman 'moves' down, as in, his whole body is not on the same 'level' as it was before. So I guess just moving him up to match with his position before he got punched would fix it. Good luck!

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Aug 26, 2016 12:07 PM #1458925
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One more thing I just noticed is that after being punched, the black stickman 'moves' down, as in, his whole body is not on the same 'level' as it was before. So I guess just moving him up to match with his position before he got punched would fix it. Good luck!

PS: Try some of the unrust challenges here if you feel like~ #selfpromotion :P


Allright, thank you once again. And for the challanges i can't do it, i arleady overwhelmed by collage homework
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Aug 26, 2016 12:23 PM #1458927
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Allright, thank you once again. And for the challanges i can't do it, i arleady overwhelmed by collage homework

Oh okay, that's fine. And welcome! ;-;
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Aug 28, 2016 8:29 PM #1459132
okay so at the beginning when he throws a double punch, his feet is sliding a little bit, and the fact that he uses the same fist to punch twice so fast seems a little awkward. in just personal opinion get some better hit sound effects these sound ew to me
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Sep 9, 2016 1:50 PM #1460225
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okay so at the beginning when he throws a double punch, his feet is sliding a little bit, and the fact that he uses the same fist to punch twice so fast seems a little awkward. in just personal opinion get some better hit sound effects these sound ew to me


Thank you, yeah i have trouble choosing sfx
update : now try with blocking and Enemy attack
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Sep 12, 2016 5:10 AM #1460438
Those first two punches are hard to see, maybe adding a bit more frames to them?
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Sep 12, 2016 5:51 AM #1460444
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Those first two punches are hard to see, maybe adding a bit more frames to them?


emm... okay, will try it later ^^
Thanks ^^
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Sep 16, 2016 12:34 PM #1460842
fine. nice work. S.A is right somehow