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Nov 1, 2016 10:21 PM #1465616
Another day, another battle.

Today we've got the master of restricted summoning, Winston

Versus

The indomitable master of the versatile morph blade, Ethernu!

Please take the time to read each story and vote fairly, and may the best man win.

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ues, vassals, and nomads who believe that we as humans should pursue all-encompassing peace on earth instead of exploiting and declaring war on one another; a noble belief and a just cause, but one almost impossibly ambitious. Their members, designating themselves as operatives identified by titles, such as “Bloodhound” or “Titan of Petals”, travel about the world doing their part to make living a better experience. Some do it indiscriminately, making changes for all and handing out second chances for the corrupt to repent of their sins, while others prefer to rid the planet of scum, seeking out and executing any and all who plague the populace with their existence alone.


The “Bloodhound” herself, Bridget Greene, took to this form of universal cleansing after she was adopted into the clan of humanitarians, following the trail of a corrupt politician and the serpents he was connected to. On the trail, she was knocked out and kidnapped by the revolutionary organization known as Sanctuary, where she most recently was forced to fight one of their members for unknown reasons. Though she fought valiantly, the rogue archer of ethereal arrows was ultimately overpowered and defeated at the hands of Winston Kitt, a discount artist who summons and manipulates stick figures to fight on his behalf. At the very summit of what was an assured victory, Winston conjured a creature unlike any of the other she had dispatched prior, it’s winged structure and dominion over flame proving far too much for the resilient fighter to handle in her diminished state.
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*** “Should have opted for the chip in my neck, damnit…” The incapacitated archer winces, rising up from her position on the hospital style bed as the bandages underneath her robe stretch to the contortions of her body. In her hand lies a phone, capable of recording sound, snapping pictures, and capturing video, even at high quality, but otherwise useless as the dead zone she has found herself in strips her of any chance at calling for backup.


*** “Not like I exactly know where I’m at, anyway…” She sighs, shutting the phone and adjusting her robe before lying back down beneath the white, flannel sheets. Just as she gets settled, however, a knock from the other side of her infirmary room door sends her into a miniature panic attack, her heart leaping from her chest as she assumes the appearance of being unperturbed by the sudden infiltration.


*** “Glad to see you’re still kicking after that mess. Can we talk?” Poking his head through the entrance, as though physically repelled by Bridget’s cautious glare, is the very artist that put her in her current situation. Once more assuming a sitting up position on the bed, the young woman simply narrows her already daggered, sky blue eyes, which to most would suggest she’s not accepting visitors. Winston, however, pretends not to notice, remaining awkwardly in the doorway not staring directly at her, but in the general direction as he ruthlessly awaits confirmation. Eventually she caves, suggesting that the summoner leave the door open behind him as he stiffly strolls into the room, arms almost forced to sway at his sides as he pulls a chair from the back wall and takes a seat in the square, temporary living space. Expecting the exchange to be long and drawn out, Bridget lets loose a short burst of breath, reaching to her side and retrieving a miniature remote before pointing it toward a relatively massive television and dialing the noise down drastically. The reporter on the screen, now reduced to mere mumbles and murmurs, carries on with her analysis of the RHG system as the archer once more directs her attention toward Winston.


*** “If you’re here to give me some sort of rehearsed apology, I’d like to you to make it quick. *I’m not exactly busy lying here and waiting to be taken back to my cell, I just don’t like you.” She states bluntly, letting the remote rest on her lap as she crosses her arms. Winston raises one of his eyebrows and takes in a deep breath, allowing his body to loosen up before getting to point of his visit.


*** “Guess it’s safe to assume you’re fine then? Wonderful news, but the only reason I’m here is to ask you a few questions you may or may not have been asked already: Who are you? What are you doing here? What does that symbol on your armor mean? Who are you with? Stuff like that.” Limiting himself to very basic questions, Winston leans forward in his chair with hands clasped together almost as though praying.

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*** “Who am I? You got my file didn’t you? That little paper with all my information on it, as though somebody’s been watching my every move since I first joined Gaia? Just like I told your handler, refer to that if you’re looking to interrogate someone.” Winston’s expression sinks as she answers, two of his fingers rising from his knees to clamp the bridge of his nose as he groans.


*** “While I understand your reasons for being difficult, I’m really not into the idea of having to play bad cop. I want to help you, Bridget- even if it means breaking you out of here, but you’ve got to fill me in on the essentials. The only things I know about this situation are your name, that you’re a good person at heart, and that you’re being held prisoner for reasons I have yet to understand.”

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*** The incapacitated archer’s expression softens, the tight fold of her arms loosening as there’s a shift beneath the bed sheets. She sits up, calling out to her visitor and staring him dead in the steel-grey eyes with what little stubbornness she has left before requesting that he shut the infirmary door. Winston complies, rising from his seat and asking for confirmation before bringing his open palm to the brass knob and quietly pulling the room meeting into seclusion.

*** “You’re a pawn, you know that right?” Bridget challenges as Winston once more reclaims his seat.

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*** “I am aware… and working on it. What makes you so sure you aren’t just another piece in the puzzle yourself?” The artist answers, straightening the yellow and black jacket warming his person.


*** “We’re all pieces on the battlefield in one way or another. I’m willing to risk you being on the other side if it means getting out of here.”


*** “Anyone ever tell you that you’re too trusting?”


*** “My mentor, on multiple occasions. I believe in second chances… for the most part.”


*** “That the reason you’re even tolerating me right now?”


*** “That, my instincts, and the teachings I’ve received. When you aren’t standing behind a gang of drawings, you’re a noticeably much different person. Your eyes are fragile, though feign resilience, your body language is noticeably more reserved, and the way you speak is very rarely in commands, but rather requests and suggestions. You sympathize with the common man and believe there is value in all life. A follower, based on what I’ve heard and seen, and a pretty blind one at that. You’re an enigma, sure, but one I find hard to identify as a sincere threat. ” Head tilted slightly to the side, Bridget reads from Winston as though he were an exposed pair of pages. The artist cannot help but crack a half-grin at the accuracy, his eyes falling to the white tile beneath his feet as the desire for knowledge hits him once more.
*** “And here I thought I was supposed to be the one gathering information.” The summoner reflects, wiping his mug with his hand and stroking his chin stubble before sitting up in his chair with raised eyebrows prior to resting his arms on the cushioned sides. “How about this: I’ll tell you everything you want to know about me if you promise to return the favor. Deal?” Sticking out his hand, Winston is forced to wait a moment, Bridget simply shifting her focus between the offer and his metallic eyes.


*** “Anyone ever tell you you’re too trusting, Mr. Kitt?” The blonde reaches and takes his hand, shaking it once before returning to her position and retrieving the remote resting on her legs. She turns the television up slightly, news of another gladiatorial scuffle come and gone enveloping the dustless room.


*** “Winston’s fine, and no, nobody has.”
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***
*** “Get the information you were looking for, Mr. Kitt?” Sanctuary’s designated scientist and well-established madman, Gus, approaches the artist just as he exits the infirmary, a beige file held tightly in his hazmat suited grip.

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*** “More or less. You make it sound like I’m some sort of spy.”


*** “More or less, huh? Well, I’d love to try to delve into her mental state myself, but Sencarn won’t let ol’ Needles anywhere near that precious skin of hers. Damn shame, too. I’m starting to think I’m not trusted around here.” The serial killer painfully jokes, a surely disappointed face hidden behind the massive gas mask and helmet atop his head.


*** “Don’t let it get you down, bud. So what’s up, Gus? Did you need me for something?” Giving the murderer a sympathetic pat on the shoulder, Winston attempts to change the subject, finally pointing out the dossier in the suited man’s grip.


*** “Oh, this? A gift from the boss himself as compensation for the little spar you did. From what I could decipher, it’s a lead pertaining to the whereabouts of your father. Suggests a location and a person within the city worth investigating.” Examining the constantly shifting, wide-eyed expression of the artist, Gus nearly breaks into a broad smile beneath his visage.


*** Winston requests to see the file, cracking it open immediately the moment it hits his hands. Set up just like a character profile, Winston examines the lines at a speed almost demonically fast, pushing past an unsuspecting Gus before taking off down the otherwise uninhabited corridor.
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*** “Hmm, yes, indeed I do recall someone who fits that description. Dark-skinned fellow, almost repulsively thin, horribly scarred. Somewhat resembling you, now that I picture him.” The tan-capped shopkeep adjusts his crimson scarf before removing the pristinely-symboled hat atop his head, the brown hair underneath leaking from beneath as he does so. Strapped to his back, glistening in the radiant overhead lights, is a blade of foreign, possibly extraordinary material. Of course, this wasn’t the artist’s first time laying eyes on the green and blue-eyed swordman, as the merchant was also an up-and-coming gladiator by the title of Ethernu.


*** Winston, practically bloodthirsty for knowledge at this point, continues to press the Treasure Trove owner as the stick figures accompanying him browse the wide selection of trinkets, weaponry and other forms of ancient artifacts. The cobalt blue stick figure, created for the spar against Bridget Greene, scours the walls for a new axe, making sure to touch everything at least once as he goes along. Meanwhile a black stick figure, created to defeat Zackeroar in a wrestling match, goes over a countertop littered with supposedly enchanted talismans, not daring to lay a finger on them for the fear of attracting a curse of some kind. Every now and again they address one another in their unintelligible dialect, only to once more resume their quest for a fantastical souvenir from the gladiator’s shop.


*** “Did you talk to him at all? Any information as to what he’s been doing, what he is doing, what his plans are?” Winston’s hand scribbles down Ethernu’s every response in a flurry of writing only the writer could consider legible, the obvious excitement emanating from his person threatening to burst with each collected bit of information.


*** “Thankfully. He was very busy but managed to make time for a traveller curious about his work. He was working under a sect of humanitarians known as Pax Gaia, keeping the peace among various African territories using his superhuman abilities. When I asked him of his next move he froze for a moment. After a while he claimed he would be in the savannahs still hard at work, but said he might take the time to visit other countries. If you’re looking for him, you might want to hurry there before he moves again.”


*** Winston’s pencil nearly flies off the page of his notebook as images of Bridget flashing into his mind at the mention of Pax Gaia, the very same organization she identified with when questioned not too long ago. Coming to the conclusion that he’d gathered all the information he needed, Winston decided to have a chat with the only person he knew that could get him instantaneously to the destination in question.


*** “You don’t know how much this means to, Ethernu. If there’s anything I can do for you, just ask.” Winston reaches out to thank the gladiator, only to be met with a sharp glare as the casually dressed shopkeep nods to the stick figures behind Winston.

*** One, sensing the wrapping-up of conversation, stand obediently by Treasure Trove’s front entrace, arms crossed at its pitch-black chest and eyes straight ahead. The other, doing his best to maintain a poor, blue poker face, wipes what one can only assume to be a sweat forehead. Strapped to his back, a double-headed axe beams, giving away any shred of innocence the stick might have had as Ethernu rises from a leaning position against one of his many trinket-littered tabletops.


*** “If you truly wish to be indebted to me, Winston, you could start by having your associate there return the weapon he so clearly plans to steal from me.” Crossing his own arms, Ethernu stares down the stick with multi-colored daggers, the swindler only able to shut his eyes and raise his nose high to the ceiling.

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*** “Why, I’m insulted! Just where do ya get off callin’ me, of all people, a thief?! I may lie, cheat, and crack jokes about piss and shit, but to think I’d go so far as to pilfer one of your petty trinkets, because I’m blue, is just plain ignorant of ya! ” Doing a terrible job of defending himself in a language the gladiator cannot even understand, the cobalt blue stick figure adjusts the axe at his back, attempting to hide the blades and shaft behind his rotund head and narrow body.


*** “Enough, Blue. It’s obvious to everyone here you won’t be leaving with that weapon. Just put it back where you found it or face the consequences.” Winston turns to face the creature with an impatient tone, the stick’s shoulders slumping slightly as he searches every corner of his mind for a solution.


*** “Alright, alright, ya caught me. Swordsman, I was plannin’ on havin’ this thing here looked at when I got home. Think you could give me a bit of history on it before I go?” Removing the weapon from its hiding place behind his person, the azurite stick presents the blade, but does not immediately offer it back to Ethernu. The shopke
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Nov 1, 2016 10:54 PM #1465619
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Nov 2, 2016 12:11 AM #1465635
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heh, thanks, I'll take that advice for the future. I think i made the ending really cheesy though -_- one slap to my face for that
you did preaty well yourself, though i suck at CnC

EDIT: I forgot to mention that I based my part of the fight on your clan's ACR. I hope your not mad about me reading all of the ACRs...
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Nov 2, 2016 1:29 AM #1465642
Okay, I enjoyed your fights, but I am going to vote for Shapiro. It was pretty straightforward, juggled both character arcs fairly well, and it was kind of refreshing. Sorry Kaminaroo Wolf, but it does seem like your story was taken over. On the bright side, I hope you enjoy your break and i'll look forward to your fights when you get back into the swing of things. I really don't feel like offering much CnC and I didn't notice much else, so i'm just going to touch on my most basic gripes.

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All-in-all. Good job to both of you and good luck on your future endeavors.
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Nov 2, 2016 2:35 AM #1465653
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Okay, I enjoyed your fights, but I am going to vote for Shapiro. It was pretty straightforward, juggled both character arcs fairly well, and it was kind of refreshing. Sorry Kaminaroo Wolf, but it does seem like your story was taken over. On the bright side, I hope you enjoy your break and i'll look forward to your fights when you get back into the swing of things. I really don't feel like offering much CnC and I didn't notice much else, so i'm just going to touch on my most basic gripes.

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All-in-all. Good job to both of you and good luck on your future endeavors.


Totally understandable ^_^ thanks for the words of encouragement and taking the time to give us feedback
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Nov 2, 2016 2:38 AM #1465655
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Totally understandable ^_^ thanks for the words of encouragement and taking the time to give us feedback


No problem. Anyways, I wish you both luck in the future:o
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Nov 3, 2016 6:41 PM #1465780
Okay, time for some belated CnC. Meant to do this yesterday but my PC crashed and erased half my progress so I decided to call it a day.

Alright, without further ado let's get to it.

(WARNING; Big CnC's ahead. Enter at own risk!)

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re still battling. Most people just bail out before or after their first battle, but you're keeping it up so I expect to see more from you in the future ;). That being said, let's move on to the CNC.

Moonlight polished the streets. Streetla
mps painted certain portions of road in pale gold. In the shadows, there was a small glint of blue ....//.... and began devising a strategy to take down the party without any fatalities.[/QUOTE]

Let me start off by saying that the motivation for this whole fight to begin with is rather... questionable. It hinges solely on the fact that Winston is doing an ACR with Ethernu as the target. The thing with the ACR is that Ethernu seems like a rather unlikely target to begin with. Furthermore, Winston's portrayal through the rest of the story seems rather shoddy and out-of-character:

“Target acquired. That was hard, now f
or the easy part…”[/QUOTE]

I don't know about you but to me Winston doesn't seem like the kind of person to be cocky about this and just dismiss his task as something casual. To me it seems more that Winston would do what's asked from him and nothing more, nothing less. Winston seems, to me, more like a person who would consider assassination a task of some gravity, and wouldn't dismiss taking out an opponent he knows is part of the RHG system as an easy target.

“Anyways it seems that boss won’t le
t you go that easily, I could always contain you but where’s the fun in that?”[/QUOTE]

Once again, this feels out of character for Winston. He isn't shown as one to take pleasure in killing throughout what I've read of Kamiroo's work so I'm fairly sure that if he had the choice of "containment" he would go with it, only going for the assassination if he sees no other alternative or is forced to do so.

I know you're still picking up writing but I'm pointing this out because it's very important: wRHG fights are NOT like their animated counterparts. It's not just about the action and the fight here, it's about story more than anything else. Any good battle also has a good reason to be fought. If your guy is just a nutjob who loves fighting you have your motivation right there, if Ethernu is the kind of guy who feels like a casual midnight homicide and Winston is the first person he encounters, you have your motivation for the battle right there. But if you're having Ethernu on the defending end you need good reason for Winston to be attacking him in the first place that still feels like it's Winston attacking you and not the kind of Winston who acts convenient to the plot.

As I said, Ethernu seems like an unlikely candidate for an ACR mission, and Winston isn't the kind of person to actively go out of his way to just fight people. He needs to either defend himself because he feels threatened, or have a good motivator to attack. As things stand he has neither, and the lack of good motivation for the fight taints your battle as a whole, and you get stuff that's completely out of character like;

“Anyways it seems that boss won’t le
t you go that easily, I could always contain you but where’s the fun in that?”[/QUOTE]

Next up on the chopping block:

As they approached Ethernu, a stick figu
re whispered idiotically to his companions, “Heh, this is going to be easy…” To the stick figure’s amazement, his companions stared at him with their fingers over their mouths, signaling him to be quiet. However, it was too late. Ethernu heard the stick figure....-[/QUOTE]

'Opponent's minions are a bunch of brainless buffoons that pose no actual threat and constantly fuck up'-cliché.

If your goal is to write either a satirical parody story, or a kid-friendly cartoon of the RHG then please be my guest and keep this up. You'd be doing a good job if you were, though I'm fairly certain you're writing this to a fairly serious degree. The thing where we see goons depicted as mindless buffoons has been outplayed so hard by modern media and at this point it's not even comical anymore. It feels like people are too lazy to actually put their characters in a situation where their enemies pose any sort of threat and they just show off their characters beating them up as if it's easier than getting out of your bed in the morning.

Right, I'm not gonna turn this in unrelenting punishment so lemme take a step back here and show that I'm not here just to yell at you. I can tell that you did make effort to at least make the sticks a bit more threatening down the line but I don't think it worked out for you the way you wanted it to. Ethernu is alerted by the stupidity of one of his adversaries, which unless their stupidity is one of their defining traits, can only serve as a plot device where the hero magically gets a lucky break in his favour. You did this again later down the line so I'll cover that in full once we get to it.

All the stick figures' efforts amount to is giving him a bit of a sore collar bone. Either go all in and admit that they're no match for Ethernu and just mow them down with a tranq rifle after which we can see Winston being in a pickle because Ethernu is the stronger opponent, or make them an actual threat and let Ethernu put more effort into winning this skirmish. Do try to pay attention to that in the future if you can!

Another thing in your story is the abundance of corny or pointless statements. We're all victim to this from time to time so don't beat yourself up about it, God knows I won't :P. Lemme just list a few for you and point out the problems they entail:

“Heh, this is going to be easy…”

Stupid remark that amounts to nothing other than being a plot device.

“Impressive, very impressive so you to
ok down my stick figures huh?”[/QUOTE]
You could've just left it at "Impressive". Winston isn't really a big talker and saying stuff like "so you took down my stick figures huh?" is completely redundant because literally everyone knows this, both your readers and your characters. The only excuse for having this sentence is if it's immediately followed by Ethernu saying "No fucking shit sherlock".

“All life in this world is precious. Y
ou only have one chance in this world to do something great, don’t waste it.”[/QUOTE]
This sentence is so cheesy I thought I was eating a raclette for a second (which I wouldn't be doing anyways because I hate raclette). The build up to this sentence especially helps making it super-cheesy. It feels like someone is holding Ethernu at gunpoint and is forcing him to say this line. I could go in depth explaining why this is so cheese and what I define by cheese but honestly any self-respecting writer learns to recognize cheesy or corny dialogue by themselves eventually. If you think you have cheesy dialogue at your hands just stop for a second and try to imagine if this exact line would be said word for word by a character in a mediocre TV series or book. If the answer is yes, scrap it and try to think of something new that still conveys the message you want to bring without it feeling like the character is being held at gunpoint;

That day Winston had lost a battle, but
he left the battlefield with the phrase “You only have one chance in this w
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Nov 4, 2016 8:19 PM #1465875
Even though i don't know what EXACTLY CnC means i have understood it is a review of the stories so here it is:
WARNING: IT MAY SUCK AND BE EXTREMELY SHORT
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Whatever i said before might be complete bullsh*t, i don't know. I didn't mean to offend anyone just give constructive criticism. Best luck to you both and i hope i get the chance to fight you one day too(when i learn how a fight is excecuted and how to use links......)
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Nov 5, 2016 2:03 AM #1465906
Okay, time for some belated CnC. Meant t
o do this yesterday but my PC crashed and erased half my progress so I decided to call it a day.

Alright, without further ado let's get to it.

(WARNING; Big CnC's ahead. Enter at own risk!)

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Sharpiro (Click to Show)


My vote goes to Kamiroo. Despite his not really being a 'battle' he did a better job in motivation, the articulation of his character's actions and his portrayal of the characters as a whole. All in all, I felt as if his was the bett
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Nov 5, 2016 2:55 AM #1465909
Heh, Greek, most people just like to know their stuff is getting read! If you've got something to say, it's going to make people happy, especially if it's feedback!

Also, I think it's comments and criticism. About 75% sure

Vern tackled most of the main things, and I voted Kamiroo for similar reasons. Wolf, you did have a bit much going on (I know it's a weakness of mine too), but personally, what I go for, is if it's a fight, I'll try hugging 50/50 story/striking. If you can't cut anything (like me), you could throw a prologue on a thread somewhere, or if it's completely unrelated, might just wanna have it be stand alone. Kinda lost points on how skewed from fighting it was, but I did like your character work.

Sharpiro, you were kinda the yin to his yang. Again, Vern mentioned most of it, but there really wasn't a clear reason why they were fighting. Personally, I'll take 'They're fighting because they're gladiators who challenged each other' once every so often, but other than that, I do like having a reason why Person A needs to punch Person B in the face. As a side note, I really enjoyed your initial description of the setting and Ethernu in the first paragraph! I wish more characters and events got that sorta treatment
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Nov 5, 2016 3:56 AM #1465911
Voted for wolf on similar grounds discussed above. Motivations and I am a sucker for backstory and context. Personal preference. As for all who CnC'd I'm impressed. Haven't seen the ilk of such in many a month.

Criticisms, albeit brief, would be Wolf, as mentioned above, making the context more relevant and impacting towards the ultimate goal could serve you well. Engaging the reader in following the "hero's" path. Writing a long story is tricky and requires you to make sure everyone is with you from beginning to end.

As for his opponent, Sharp, can't add much more than what everyone said above. Short, sweet, good fight, lacking reasoning. If you added two or three paragraphs of motive I would've voted for you in a heartbeat.

Now some thanks:

Urako, your insight is valued.
Vern, you are a gentleman and a scholar.
Greek, carry on doing this sort of stuff and don't be sorry for giving your opinion.
Crank, always a pleasure seeing you around.
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Nov 5, 2016 7:02 PM #1465960
Ok, I read all of your CnC. Looks like I need to improve my reason for transition in story telling. Thanks for all of this feedback ^_^
And I think its now evident at this point that people know English is not my first language...
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Nov 5, 2016 11:16 PM #1465976
Hey, don't feel bad that English isn't your first language. It's my only language, so what you're doing now is already extemely impressive in that regard
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Nov 5, 2016 11:40 PM #1465984
Crank's telling the truth. And here's some fun facts;
1# English is my only language as well.
2# English is the hardest language to learn.
You sir and anyone else who learns English has my respect.
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Nov 6, 2016 12:56 AM #1465995
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English is the hardest language to learn.


Germany/Iceland/China begs to differ. (Seriously though have you seen Icelandic that shit is insane)

Sharpiro, if you ever need motivation when learning then remember that people like SJCRPV, me and (I believe) Lobotomizer are all non-native to the English language. People are always astonished when I tell them I'm in fact not a native English speaker. You can do that too, if you're determined enough ;)

I'd say English isn't that difficult a language depending on the roots of your own language. If you're someone from Asia I imagine it being quite a bit harder to pick up English, but if you're like me, a native Dutch speaker, then it's significantly easier. There's a reason people refer to Dutch as 'a drunken German sailor trying to speak English'.

Regardless, I'd argue English is definitely one of the easier languages to get used to. All its tricks and grammatical nonsense are a tough nut to crack at first but if you get accustomed to them it's a cakewalk from thereonout. It's not like any language is easy to learn at first. English is not like French where the word changes depending on its gender, or, even worse, like German where the same word gets spelled differently based on its role in the sentence it is in etc.... (Life is too short to learn German.)

I guess what I'm trying to say is ; English is easy if you keep using it. Easier than other languages at least, in my opinion. Stuff like 'a' or 'an' and 'your'/'you're' becomes a habit after a while. Also don't forget to capitalize your I's if they refer to yourself as a person (which you're doing just perfectly).

Well here's my useless post of the month. I guess I get to indulge every once in a while too :P.
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