Jeffery

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Nov 22, 2016 2:41 AM #1467712
Jeffery's
a tall black stick figure with spiky hair

moral: whatever helps himself

story : A man long forgotten.......came from a honest place a pure place.
until one day...something in him changed......something unknown.
the only known thing is he is the smartest man of where he came.

Powers:
ice/water bending
fire bending
air bending
Earth bending
Full power(a form that is activated before death and turns him into his current power in use, also it takes 5 seconds to switch powers)


fighting style:
he uses water/ice when he is laid back and studying his enemy.
uses earth when he is defensive.
uses air when evading.
uses fire when he wants his enemy DEAD.


weakness:
he cant instantly switch powers (takes 30 seconds to switch from fire to air ect)
he is weak from the opposite power(fire is hurt by water ect)
He dies from being hit by all his powers.
he is tired from his full power form.
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Nov 22, 2016 2:53 AM #1467715
Decent RHG, but you don't have a 150x150 pixel image or an animation demonstrating his powers, both of which are required.
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Nov 23, 2016 2:26 AM #1467840
Ok sorry for no rhg demo....thought I could add that later
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Nov 23, 2016 2:29 AM #1467841
He's correct. If you don't have all the necessary elements, I'll be forced to lock the thread until you can. You have a week.
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Nov 23, 2016 7:52 PM #1467918
ok thanks for the warning
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Nov 23, 2016 7:53 PM #1467919
wait I kinda have one but its OLD
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Nov 23, 2016 8:36 PM #1467924
Looks way too op. I also thought you said he was tall.
http://forums.stickpage.com/attachment.php?attachmentid=5912&d=1479867810
This isn't exactly tall.
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Nov 23, 2016 9:15 PM #1467925
well its a 150 x 150 pic(well its a 105.1 x 150)also tell me whats op/what to nerf.
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Nov 23, 2016 11:04 PM #1467930
Avatar, the last stick-bender. I see how Jeffrey is inspired by that.

Besides your character is missing a Demonstration, here's a question,
does Jeffrey specifically transition into a specific manipulation? like, one at a time?
another question, when in Full Power; does he become that element that he manipulates? like elemental?
for example; He's manipulating Earth, but almost dies so he resorts to Full Power, does he become an Earth Elemental?
Just questions for you to clarify.

anyways, good luck.
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Nov 24, 2016 1:16 AM #1467937
ok I'm making the video demo thing but yes and yes
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Dec 3, 2016 4:04 PM #1468843
why does he control all those elements,seems a bit op but i dont judge anyway you should keep only one power like fire water or etc
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Dec 3, 2016 7:48 PM #1468876
boi look at your RHG and I dare you to come back and say that again
Anyway it's limited by the fact that he can only use one at a time, and there is vulnerability period when switching.
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Dec 3, 2016 8:14 PM #1468884
Quote from Creepin_Bro
boi look at your RHG and I dare you to come back and say that again
Anyway it's limited by the fact that he can only use one at a time, and there is vulnerability period when switching.


lmao
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Dec 4, 2016 7:47 PM #1468983
Jeffery's quite a simple name for an RHG like this lol. All you need is a 150x150 image and you're good to go
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Dec 5, 2016 8:38 PM #1469131
You're forgetting the demo.