Majic's Powers
* She can wipe out every living creature 1 kilometer distance [She can only use this If she is almost dead]
* She can cast an explosion 10 meters distance
* She can evade long distance attacks.

Majic's Weaknesses
* She is not good in Martial Arts. fighting her in close combat will be effective to bring her down.
* She is allergic to smoke, smoke slows her down.

Majic's Story :

Majic is a Wizard that controls explosion magic. She has one of the most unique magic skills in her family. They where fighting Beasts to protect there town, but one day, a massive Beast Attack summoned by a Human that destroyed Majic's Home and her family. She was left alive by using her Explosion magic. Majic's Mission is to find the Human and avenge her Family.


Hitlist : My Brother "HYPOH" ^_^
Availability : Nope. Current Battle with HYPOH

Majic ^_^

I can't see the demo anywhere.

"She can wipe out every living creature 1 kilometer distance [She can only use this If she is almost dead]"

Okay then.

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* She can wipe out every living creature 1 kilometer distance [She can only use this If she is almost dead]

Okay then.

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* She can wipe out every living creature 1 kilometer distance [She can only use this If she is almost dead]

Okay then.

So, a few things to tell you, starting off with requirements.

Your image needs to be exactly 150x150 pixels
You need an animated Demonstration of all of your characters abilities
You need a Battles section
and You need a win/loss points section


now, for the character itself

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"She can wipe out every living creature 1-kilometer distance (She can only use this If she is almost dead)"

No, stop that.
that literally means, if you've almost lost, you instantly win.

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"She can cast an explosion at 10 meters distance"

can she be hurt by her own explosions? cause you know, most explosions can reach over 10 meters, seeing as that's not that far, also, that range limit means she has to be close to her enemies, but she is bad with close quarters combat

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"She is allergic to smoke, smoke slows her down."

Explosions make smoke, and coming back to the 10 meters thing, anything larger than a firecracker would create smoke that she would probably choke on.

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"She can evade long distance attacks."
"She is not good in Martial Arts. fighting her in close combat will be effective to bring her down."

nothing wrong with these.





Anyway, this is all just advice and opinions, it just generally seems that you need to think through your character a bit more, I wish you good luck.

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Okay then.

Okay then.
Probably'll get an infringement for this lmaooo

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Majic's Powers
* She can wipe out every living creature 1 kilometer distance [She can only use this If she is almost dead]
* She can cast an explosion 10 meters distance
* She can evade long distance attacks.

Majic's Weaknesses
* She is not good in Martial Arts. fighting her in close combat will be effective to bring her down.
* She is allergic to smoke, smoke slows her down.

Majic's Story :

Majic is a Wizard that controls explosion magic. She has one of the most unique magic skills in her family. They where fighting Beasts to protect there town, but one day, a massive Beast Attack summoned by a Human that destroyed Majic's Home and her family. She was left alive by using her Explosion magic. Majic's Mission is to find the Human and avenge her Family.


Hitlist : My Brother "HYPOH" ^_^
Availability : Nope. Current Battle with HYPOH

Powers are op or not powers.
"Powers" counteract weaknesses. I don't think you've seen an explosion either.
Story is ew
Can't battle till you are accepted.
No demo.
'Gratz, you made a fool of yourself.

Okay then.

EDIT: I almost forgot the image LMAO

Meh, I think this RHG was made just to battle HYPOH. So to the creator of this thread, you guys are pretty much typing gobbledygook. I mean, no single post from the creator since it was well... created.

Well since everyone's dropping oppinions anyway;

* She can cast an explosion 10 meters distance
And
*She is allergic to smoke, smoke slows her down.

Love how your RhG creates an explosion devoid of smoke. Its epic.
Well, then again, you might've wanted the power to be a weakness so.. moving on.


* She can wipe out every living creature 1 kilometer distance [She can only use this If she is almost dead]

Allahu Akbar. I'm guessing this is a suicide move? Since Your RhG is basically considered "A living Creature." I see no exceptions.

Again, i don't really think we'll get a reply soon. As i stated above, I believe the RHG was made Just to battle HyPoH since the hitlist and availability were pretty much 'In-built..' and had the name HyPoH engraved on both places. Then again, Just my oppinion. This rhg would be great if you took everyone's oppinions into consideration.

This would be a great rhg, if it wouldnt be too op, just sayin :D