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May 16, 2017 7:11 PM #1479792
At last, I've made my test room. Special thanks to Piston for inspiring me to do so! If anyone has any questions, comments, or critiques for my characters, feel free to share your thoughts!

This room is NPCs-Only, so current gladiators do not count (sorry Vamprina).

Being NPCs, these characters lack demos.

Dr. Amos Wilde Crowe

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, mostly because he fears he’d scare them off with his voice or outlook. That said, he has absolutely zero fear of animals, and is especially interested in animal-human hybrid beasts.

If a combat situation arises, Crowe will try his hardest to flee the fight scene. However, if cornered, he will turn on the offender and fight with fierce determination. In this state, he won’t give up until his opponent retreats or is rendered unable to fight back.
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-reputed doctor at the Doctor’s Central hospital. His origins were a mystery, as he was rumored to have been orphaned on the streets. Crowe’s most distinguishing feature was his costume, which consisted of a black trench coat, a pair of resilient military-grade combat boots, and a hooded cloak made entirely of crow’s feathers. On an even stranger note, over the years, the Doctor’s costume has somehow grown along with him.

The Doctor’s Central hospital was created and funded entirely by Dr. Crowe himself, but when Stickpage City accepted a new clinic (known to many as the ‘Healing Hands Clinic’), the Doctor’s small business soon ceased to exist.

Running low on income and completely out of a job, Crowe took to the streets in hopes that he’d make it as a street medic. However, after running into a free-spirited gang of psychos, his whole life changed forever. After treating the wounds of one of their members, the psychos were very grateful and started to treat him like family. Eventually, Crowe bent to their cause and swiftly forgot his selfless goal of helping people. Within a few short years, he and his newfound comrades became the scourge of the entire City.

The leader of the psychos was a heavily scarred street fighter named Brutus. Brutus instantly took a liking to Crowe’s quirky nature, and eventually grew to respect the man’s newfound trickery. In time, Crowe became known as the Darecrow, and was famed for his skill in evading law enforcement…as well as taking ridiculous risks (which would always pay off).

Of course, all “good” things must come to an end. One day, the psychos decided to give up their usual robbery and start on murder. Disgusted with the new development, the Darecrow secretly communicated with shadow agents from the World Regulation Force (WRF). A mere five days later, the agents discovered Brutus’s hideout, and the authorities arrested almost the entire gang. They were missing three members, Brutus, Jailbreak (Brutus’s second-in-command), and the Darecrow himself.

It didn’t take long for Brutus to find out about Crowe’s treachery. Infuriated, he handed the Doctor over to an accomplice of his. The accomplice only had instructions to torture Crowe, but he got majorly carried away and took to heavy experimentation instead.

Within a few short weeks, the Doctor was nigh unrecognizable. His arms had been replaced by the frayed wings of a crow, and his feet were no longer human, but talon-like and cruel-looking. Every one of his fingertips could reveal or retract a syringe-like tube, each filled with his own blood. His eyes had faded from their original blue into a hard dark grey, and his blonde hair had shifted to a coal-black shade. Even his voice had changed. He could no longer speak, and was capable of making only the harsh caws and croaks of the animal his last name favored.

When Brutus found out what happened, he couldn’t care less. He and Jailbreak beat the mutated Crowe and left him half-dead in the streets.

Alone, the Doctor tried to find a new beginning in other jobs, but everyone took fright and shut their doors in his face. Distraught, Crowe returned to the streets and lived in poverty for the next several years. At length, the Doctor lay dying in a roadside ditch, surrounded by crows. Ever since his experimentation, the birds held an unusual interest in him, and would accompany him wherever he went.

Their presence helped Crowe pull his fading memories back together, bringing him back to when he used to work at his hospital. He’d brought so much joy to people…who said he was to give up now? His ugly history began to unravel, and Crowe was disgusted with what he saw. No…it wasn’t going to end like this.

With almost superhuman effort, Crowe drew himself up and began the painful journey back to his old workplace. Once there, he got his claws into all the chemicals he could find, including some he’d been experimenting with. Days later, the Doctor was teetering on the brink of his sanity, but he’d finally somewhat reversed the effects of his crow mutation. Now, his arms only converted to wings when he wanted them to. However, his feet, eyes, and hair refused to respond to his chemical tinkering.

Finished with his self-experimentation, Crowe realized he’d reawakened his past desires as the Darecrow. Seized by a powerful urge, he ran all sorts of chemical tests on his blood, figuring out quite quickly that he had (somehow) altered its composition in such a way that he could now cure every disease imaginable. Unfortunately, he could also create virtually any type of toxin he desired. As soon as he’d come to this conclusion, he proceeded to test his knowledge by using the deadliest viruses in his collection…on himself. Despite Crowe’s recklessness, every test was successful. It was almost as if the Doctor could sense the viral compositions, as well as figure out their chemical counters…instinctively. Not only that, but he could alter his blood’s composition to whatever chemical he required, without suffering any ill effects. However, when injecting the cure, no matter what, it was always extremely painful. This effect didn’t last long, but it was so unimaginably strong that Crowe himself had to rest for a couple of hours between doses.

Unsure of what to make of his discoveries, he decided to clean up the clinic, focused on making it a habitable residence for himself. So far, he has succeeded, and has lived there ever since.
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Hale


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al, who loves nothing more than to entertain people. He will not harm innocent lives.
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Sure Shot – believe it or not, standing absolutely still will mess up Hale’s aim. He literally can’t hit a stationary target because he keeps anticipating which way it’s going to move. His mind makes pictures of all the target’s possible motion paths, causing him to get dizzy if he stares at the target for too long. If the target refuses to move, he’ll have to resort to melee.

Can Touch That – Hale will only be able to deflect a projectile/dodge an attack if it’s coming at him from the front (and if he can see it). He can only deflect one thing every few seconds; and that will be the closest projectile each time. If someone shoots a barrage of rockets at him, he’s toast. Only projectiles can be deflected, NOT laser beams, dragon breath, poison clouds etc.

Terrain Master – no traction on frigid surfaces; walking on extremely hot surfaces is an extremely bad idea as his shoes would melt. Also, his shoes are what allow all the sticking. If they are somehow removed, he’ll have nothing but his own human feet to get him out of trouble.

Ranged Weapons – The Colt will only fire as far as its listed range
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May 16, 2017 7:42 PM #1479794
John Doe? Heh, there's some nostalgia! Might have to finally write that mini series that's been on my mind forever!
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Aug 9, 2017 9:22 PM #1482770
Wow, so uhm, I also have a medic that wears a plague doctors costume that I plan to use in my stories, and I just wanted to say that I did not copy off of you when I created that character. It was all coincidental I swear.
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Aug 9, 2017 9:37 PM #1482771
That's alright!

In the older times, plague doctors actually did intend to heal people; the masks they wore were just to protect them from airborne germs. Then Halloween came along and ruined everything, putting the plague doctor costume in a bad light. You could make almost anything creepy these days.

Your plague doctor can be a healer too; that's what they were originally. As long as you don't give him the exact same powers or something (e.g. turning into a crow, needle fingers etc.) you should be fine. :)
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Aug 9, 2017 9:39 PM #1482773
One of my characters literally has the same name as a character from a game I play. Of course when I created him I didn't know about said character.

Actually, his hero name is in my username! Maybe I should make a character test room as well. I'm not sure though.
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Aug 9, 2017 9:49 PM #1482774
@IgnusBurns: yeah it's terrible when you make up this amazing character and then see something almost exactly like them somewhere else (e.g. Batman: Arkham Asylum, Scarecrow). It can be infuriating, and it's hard to have to change your idea (THEY COPIED MEEEEEE!!!!!).
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Aug 9, 2017 9:53 PM #1482775
@Cass: Well, when I look at him, the only real thing the two have in common is the fact that they both control fire and their name. Honestly it's not that bad. It was an easy work around.
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