Finally got around to reading this! I think you did a really good job, at least with the characters I recognized, and the fight was on point. You did well with Annabelle too, none of her bits seemed too out of character, I'm glad you included her and Alex! It was a fun read!
This seems almost obligatory but I thought I'd stop by and let you know that you did a great job. Congratulations. It's a shame though that you're opponent had to forfeit though.