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Adaro, the Water Spirit

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Jul 30, 2017 3:18 AM #1482364
Adaro

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Personality:
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ften introspective. Although intelligent, situationally aware, and capable under pressure, Adaro is strongly disinclined to any sort of leadership, preferring to follow the lead of others. This isn’t to say Adaro does not make plans - quite the opposite - but he does not tend to choose and pursue his own goals. He prefers to latch on to another’s cause and follow them, though he is extremely loyal to those he does follow (one might question, however, whether this is truly genuine loyalty or just his lack of general direction or ambition keeping him attached to his chosen allies). Adaro is inclined to carefully plan any course of action he might take, but just as likely to break those plans in the moment.

Adaro is the sort of individual who will light himself on fire to keep another warm with little seconds thoughts. This applies to essentially everyone, although he suppresses the urge against those he fights with varying degrees of success, but is almost unconditional to those he has latched onto.

Adaro is disillusioned and pragmatic, and while still almost unconditionally loyal and perhaps overly-benevolent at times, has a touch of world weariness that he generally keeps restrained.

In battle, Adaro is fond of clever approaches to problems - even actively enjoying them - and prefers to solve them obliquely, though he is willing to take a more brute force approach if the situation calls for it. Adaro is well aware of the psychological effects of a barely visible, shadowy figure stealthily moving about ever expanding tendrils of fog, and the fear it can induce in less trained individuals and actively exploits it.

That said, while he is a skilled and intelligent combatant, he does not naturally possess a killer instinct. Though he is past the point of hesitating at key moments, he is not overly ruthless. He will allow his foes to escape if he is permitted to, and avoids inflicting physical pain when he can. He is more willing to use psychological approaches however, using fear and actively prying at weaknesses if he can find them, not out of cruelty but simply an underestimation of the weight they can carry.[/spoiler]

Appearance:
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scled build. Whatever skin color Adaro once had is hidden beneath his now spectral form, the silvery blue of water. He has a long face, not particularly attractive features, and calculating eyes that still show their original brown. His hair is cut short, its color barely distinct from his skin, though still recognizably separate.

Adaro wears a grey overcoat and carries a small bag of supplies.[/spoiler]

Story:
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learning rhetoric, mathematics, logic, and the arts at one of the schools in his city. Born to a wealthy merchant family, Adaro had need for his education, both as a matter of being able to manage the family’s finances when he came of age and for the prestige that came with a proper education.

Adaro took to the education well, being relatively intelligent, but lacked motivation to work in the family spice company - something that would have become a more significant problem if it were summarily interrupted by outside events. One of the many small city-states that dotted the northern coast of the continent, it was a wealthy but poorly defended prize to be taken. When the ever-shifting web of alliances that determined the politics of the continent left them isolated, the Empire pounced without hesitation.

The war went as anyone would have expected. The Empire’s military was not just overwhelmingly larger, it was better. Better equipped, better trained, better supplied, and better lead.

General Gairovald lead the Empire on the campaign, spearheading the assault with a contingent of his dreaded Fountain Mages. Able to claim any position and rapidly fortify it with self-sustaining, powerful magic, they were able to rapidly hemm in the city’s forces, isolating them to be cut down piecemeal. It was less than one month before the city was annexed.

But an easy war brought a difficult peace. The wealth of the city was stripped, looted by the Empire in order to fund yet another campaign. But the populace was barely damaged, only a few lost in scattered battles. Humiliated over being conquered and enraged at having their city looted, rebellion festered almost immediately.

Adaro ended up becoming part of this rebellion, as much because his colleagues in the university were almost unanimously in favor of it as his own desire for independence.

But idealistic fervor and an angry populace, it would prove, were not sufficient to form a successful rebellion. The Empire had still had well trained soldiers, and the nobility assigned to watch over the city were almost unassailable in their homes and offices with the benefit of Fountain Magic.

Furthermore, while hardly utopian, the Empire was not so draconian that the will to fight lasted through the years easily. Though the city itself had lost much wealth, unrestricted trade with the empire helped mitigate this blow as the years past, and the peasantry in the countryside enjoyed both better harvests with the introduction of certain imperial methods, and were treated better under the reformed imperial law than under the unmitigated serfdom the city had maintained over the centuries.

But certain elements in the city still seethed with resentment even as the years past. His father having died of a cough, Adaro inherited what remained of the family estate, using it to house his comrades and to fund some of their ventures. Despite frequent raids, arsons, and murders, they ultimately achieved nothing. They simply did not have the organization or resources, and few outside the empire were in a position to aid them and willing to do so.

It was almost painful, then, when the Empire fell to another rebellion over the course of a few months. But as republican revolutionaries long in the making seized the palaces and fortresses of the Empire, forming the Continental Republic, it became very clear that the new government had no intention of releasing any of the Empire’s acquisitions. Quite the opposite.

But the success of one revolution fueled the flames for a hundred more, and the idea that maybe the city truly could become independent once more found its way from whispered discussions in the taverns into open statements.

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Jul 30, 2017 9:42 AM #1482367
Wow.

This is really impressive. Damn.

There's a lot of information, an impressive level of depth, and just a lot of great things to say about his character.

I do have two questions, however:
1. This 'Empire,' in what ways does it exist? The general accepted canon in the lounge is that Vague City/Sierra Pines/Stickpage City/Rock Hard City is a city in present day Earth. Is your version set in the future? Is 'The Empire' simply a beyond the stars place which no human has ever tread upon? Or is 'The Empire' really just an underground organisation on Earth? Just so we know where to fit your character in with all this.
2. Being a war veteran, does Adaro suffer at all from PTSD?
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Jul 30, 2017 12:46 PM #1482369
Thank you.

1) For one of my previous characters, Gairovald, I ended up using another universe connected to this one from vague means as a setting because it made it easier to design a character I wanted. Adaro is from the same setting. The Empire's world is more or less in the late 1700's, but uses magic more than gunpowder. The Empire is a nation one of the more powerful nations in that setting.
2) I was on the fence of doing this for a while but I decided to go with no, because PTSD is a pretty serious thing and I wanted to be sure I could do it proper justice if I were going to try.
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Aug 3, 2017 1:26 AM #1482478
How old is Adaro?
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Aug 3, 2017 1:36 AM #1482481
He's somewhere in his mid twenties.
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Aug 14, 2017 11:52 AM #1482966
Wait, I reread his weaknesses, and does that mean using fire is the only way to brute-force defeat him?
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Aug 14, 2017 4:43 PM #1482978
Not necessarily. Fire is the only way most characters can hurt him while he is incorporeal but you can still just stab him when he is. So it's definitely helpful, but since him fighting implies he will be actually doing things there will be windows where he is corporeal to exploit.
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Aug 15, 2017 12:28 AM #1483001
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Not necessarily. Fire is the only way most characters can hurt him while he is incorporeal but you can still just stab him when he is. So it's definitely helpful, but since him fighting implies he will be actually doing things there will be windows where he is corporeal to exploit.


Oh... okay then. I understand what you mean.
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