-Amit is able to regenerate at a fast pace by eating things. EX. his entire upper body is blown away so he eat's anything of any size until his upper body is all regenerated.Why? How? His upper body is gone. Is his head bouncing around eating shit, or what? And why?

-Amit's weapon Vundil (Voon-Deal) can create large black orbs of dark energy and shape it into bullets, elongating arms & hands. Orb bullet things? fine. What's the weapon? The fuck do arms and hands have to do with black orbs that can get shaped into bullets? Also, why?

-Amit has a power called Anant (An-Non-Tuh) where he summons an incredibly large and dark orb that can stretch and reshape itself into multiple forms and also if cut it will multiply. Ex. A sword cuts Anant in half, Anant will now be two seperate beings and the sword cuts those two in half, those two will now become 4 seperate parts of Anant and each can attack seperately or together. Seems simple enough. Why, tho?

-Amit has good reflexes and can move at high speeds. 99% of wRHG chars ever, but fine. How good are his reflexes? How fast is his speed? Also, why?

-Although Amit can regenerate quickly, fire will stop him from regenerating WHY?

-Amit cannot hold Anant for long periods of time as it requires a lot of concentration. WHY?

-Amit's healing ability is also another weakness of his because if Amit is about to bite on something his open mouth is left vulnerable which means electricity, fire, bombs, etc will destroy him from the inside. The fuck...??? Newsflash -- a bomb on the outside is USUALLY just as deadly as a bomb on the inside. If otherwise...WHY?!

-Amit's body is actually the weapon and if you destroy the weapon you knock out Amit. "Mah whole bodeh's a lethal weapon" -- that aside, HOW?!

-Due to Amit's personality he rather not use his speed immediately and instead use it as a surprise attack. WHY? Also, using personality as an excuse to not use powers is overused and pretty dumb. If someone is a fighter, you do things well. You don't just shit on your own powers because personality reasons, if no reason is given.


-Whenever Anant is cut the orb will try to recombine into one being rendering Anant unavailable as an option to attack or defend. I thought they were all separate weapons...this is contradictory. Also, WHY?!

Amit's Personality is that of a seemingly non-caring person but he hides the fact that he is incredibly hungry and unconsciously want's to protect himself or others. Sometimes during battle, his hunger may take over him and will act more aggressive and try to bite you even when he isn't injured. This is very shallow description which leaves him being a 2D sideline char, not something another person could write well. Let's ignore the fact it's also trite AF because everyone has a trite stage. Also, WHY?!

Amit's appearance is that of a black figure covered in a cloak and hood wearing jeans. Amit's face has dark red eyes and sharp teeth. While that is his main appearance his monstrous appearance when injured or non-injured is that of a large black silhouette with sharp teeth pointing outwards with bright red eyes. This is very vague, but I can roll with this. Edgy AF, but doable.

Amit's Weapon or well his main body looks like a spear made out of bamboo with the sharp metal blade coming out from one end. GAHGAOFFLJDLHFOIFJL. No. Just no. You do not have a body that looks like a bamboo spear. No. This is not Veggie Tales where you can be a cylinder that bounces around and does shit with no body parts. No. This is worse than having some Edgemaster 3000 spear that has someone trapped inside. Just no. I need to say that a few more times. NOOOOOOO. No-nononononono. Also, before you rip this atrocity of malformed ingrown creativity...WHY??!

Amit was a human that had his conscious being transferred into a spear and to this day he still wonders how in the hell the scientists were able to do that. SO DO I. I ALSO WONDER WHY. Amit was also only one of the ten thousand test subjects WHY?!?! in containing a god HOW THE FUCK DO TEST SUBJECTS FROM SCIENTISTS CONTAIN A GOD?! AND WHY?! that could swallow the entire world. Whhaaat?! WHY?! HOW?! The experiments were somehow successful Some-agjadsgjafleel;d;k;fing-how?!?! and the test subjects themselves showed excellent control over themselves WHAT DOES THIS EVEN MEAN?! even after a part of the god was transferred inside them OH. THERE is the Edgemaster 3000. I thought I was only going to see Edgemaster 1000 in this edition. Also, WHY?! HOW?!. The Scientists decided to send them out to the public WHY?! and allow them to live a normal life with their familyDo you mean they were from all one family, or did you mean to type "families"? Also, WHY?!Also also, TEST EXPERIMENTS WITH GOD FRAGMENTS INSIDE THEM DON'T LEAD NORMAL LIVES. but only Amit was left behind to experiment on more Ofc. Because Hero is random special fuck. Also, WHY?! and a few days later they were able to make Amit create a substance inside him to create a body although it wasn't exactly like human skin it still functions like it. What? Why? How?! They sent Amit to the public giving him a few clothes. OH GEE, no mission, no purpose, no nothing, just some clothes. What kind of random ass irresponsible scientists are these?! So they somehow do some random shit with stopping and containing a god, but then are too dopey to do this right? ALSO, WHY?! Amit left and went missing two years later. WHY?! He sprang up again on the news for being wanted for unknown reasons.Oooo...hidden past. WHY?! Amit in truth learned over the two years missing how to use magic and manipulate his own body to You just told us the experiments all had great control over themselves, so why did this take rando fucking hero two extra years in his Kryptonite palace at the north pole? and receiving knowledge on how to summon Anant The fuck? How?! WHY?! but he still cannot control it Ofc. Hero can't control power shit thing. Also, WHY?! and after being called out on the news AHHAEHDHFEHRFR? Called out? News? I THOUGHT THESE REASON WERE UNKNOWN?! Also, WHY?! he would now wander the world to find someone or something to help him control Anant more effectively so that he can protect himself and possibly those closest to him. WHO WHAT WHEN WHERE HOW...AND WHY?!?!

Somewhere No. in the mountains Edgemaster 4k, Amit sits in a crisscross position. Third Person Present tense. No. While a large group of bounty hunters gathers nearby some rocks to stay hidden -_-
"Oi crossbowman aim for his head," Said the leader of the group
"Why not just attack him head on?" asked the crossbowman
"This is quicker and a lot safer than attacking him head-on." Stilted convo, and CROSSBOWMAN. Do these people not know their own names? I don't think "crossbowman" is even a thing aside from a combat unit in Stronghold 1st Ed.
So the crossbowman aimed for Amit's head and boom! The arrow Crossbows fire bolts, not arrows pierces Amit's head! I thought he had reflexes. Clearly not THAT good.The group stays silent and Amit makes the first move picking up the arrow and eating it. ”Arrows” don’t just go through shit. In something like a head, they get stuck. This confused the group Me too. Also, #understatement. You headshot a dude and he just eats your projectile. That’s not “confused.” and one noticed that a small dark orb was beginning to manifest at the end of the blade of Amit's spear GAHFLDJLSDFJOEINKDSJF. I thought he WAS a spear somehow?! WHAT EVEN IS THIS?!
"Hey!! Watch out for that dark ball thingy!" Dumbass bounty hunter hur He yells and Amit immediately starts firing balls of dark energy Because the movies have taught us well – when in danger, yell, and that triggers the monster to make the danger worse in all directions causing the entire group to be forced to move out of their hiding spots His orbs are like bullets. They were behind rocks. In mountains. In rock-strewn mountains it’s not hard AT ALL to stay safe from bullets. This is bull. and attack Amit altogether.You mean “All together” but that’s not what you wrote. Amit creates another dark orb but instead instead of WHAT?!, he smashes the ground with his spear along with the orb So his spear is connected to the orb? SO far – 1) he creates orbs. 2) he has a weapon that creates orbs 3) he summons a single living orb 4) he is a monster 5) he is a spear 6) his weapon is a spear 7) his spear is now smashing orbs into the ground. WHAT AM I EVEN READING. a dark snake-like body began moving underground. The snake-like body grabbed a victim and smashed him repeatedly on the ground finally going back under and picking up other victims and giving them the same fate that the first victim had.#Tremor. Also literally the most uninspiring rendition of the only interesting thing so far. Snake smashes shit. Smashes more shit too. Amit was getting tired Ofc he was. He’s Edgemaster 5k. They ALWAYS get bored and tired with petty inferior beings that dare challenge them. It’s a standard product defect with Edgemaster 5000s. and with lightning speed No. Lightning moves at the speed of sub-atomic energy transfer rates. I somehow feel you aren’t using this as a metaphor. Even if you are, it’s trite AF. So still no., he killed the closest enemy towards him decapitating his head.With his spear that’s a weapon or his body that’s a weapon or his body that’s a spear?? OH. Wait. It was with his consummate Edginess. Amit then went on a wild killing spree Ofc. gracefully killing You just said it was wild killing. MAKE UP YOUR MIND. those who tried hurting him.Literally no one except movie thugs or robots would still try hurting him at this point. Near the beginning, the bounty hunter group had two hundred members backtracking to give us details you should have done at first is just NO. and now they are reduced to ninety-four members.Not really that frightening to halve the group. Like, you act like his powers were awesome and unstoppable. But now he’s killing less people than I did in a 20 min Global Strike FPS Handgun battle. Amit decided to simply end with his best weapon. Because he saves the best for last, just like any Edgemaster 6000. Slowly a golden cross No. Also, WHY?! would No. WOULD IT? WOULD IT? Future tense?! NO/ begin to manifest on Amit's forehead No. Also, WHY?! and a large dark orb would No. appear in the sky.
"Holy @$@! Censoring. No. this hurts my bloody Why are all these fuckers some kind of Cockney/British/Auzzie? head!" Amit says angrily ALSO, WHY!??!
He raises a fist up and then opens his hand as much as possible Also known as spreading your fingers, the way all beings with fingers do. Purple prose. No. which was the command Ohhh…so this is the one random orb that’s intelligent. I thought he couldn’t control it, though…now they have their own handsigns like some kind of Falcon/Facloner duo? NO. to spread out and kill everything. Ofc. Also, no.
He managed to kill Skipping shit that might be interesting. most of them but 26 ended up surviving telling others about what they encountered. HOW THE FUCK DIDN”T HE KILL ALL OF THEM?! HE’S A SPECIAL SNOWFLAKE EDGEMASTER 7000 THAT HAS PART OF A GOD IN HIM AND IS A MONSTER WEAPON THING WITH SUMMONING AND ORB SHIT. NO. JUST NO. AND THEY TOLD OTHERS? IS THIS SOME KIND OF “True story” HORROR MOVIE KNOCKOFF?! GYEHUODIAOHFHE!