RHG Ze / Ro

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Oct 28, 2017 12:29 AM #1485143
Name Ze Ro

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- Abilities: Re & Ze’s Abilities Together :
Energy Bond : They Are Connected by A energy between them that connects their life force, mind, and allows them to switch places with each other’s body in battle allowing the other body to heal.
Ze :
Burst : Can absorb multiple forms of energy and even some abilities into his arm and unleash it in multiple ways.
Energy Sense And Control : If there is a form of energy around him, he can control it and sense it, making it easy to dodge blasts and energy based attacks without sight.
Re :
Ghost : He can create ghost clones that can harm people. He makes up to 3.
Ghost Burst : This Ability Takes A While To Charge So He Doesn’t Use It Since It Takes too long. He Makes 1 Ghost Gather Up energy While He Gathers Up Energy Then They Fuel It Into his Body.
Ghost Walk : He Can Become Invisible and Intangible Phasing through walls and objects.


- Weaknesses:
Can not handle Extreme Amounts Of Energy.
Can’t absorb a lot of abilities
Ze Is A Human. Re is connected to Ze. Possibility If Ze dies so Does Re.

- About/Story: Zentokashi Remno Was 11 when he met a spirit. He had the ability to see every type of energy and absorb it into his body. To help the new spirit he used his ability to absorb it but since he is untraind it failed and he lost the ability to absorb energy into his entire body but now just his arm. But this created a body for the spirit who Zentokashi named Re after the two letters in his last name. Re Becan The Spirit Of Vengeance Who seeks out his murderers. Ze Has Helped him ever since and formed a energy bond between him and Re.

- Demo: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4IiAQAecGWQ&feature=youtu.be

- Battles:

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Oct 28, 2017 2:35 AM #1485152
Jesus Christ, that image is huge. You need to scale it down to exactly 150x150.

Burst : Can absorb multiple forms of energy and even some abilities into his arm and unleash it in multiple ways.

Could you go into more detail on this? How exactly does he absorb the energy, and what types can he absorb? What types of abilities can he absorb? For example, can he absorb abilities that come from one's biology?

Energy Sense And Control : If there is a form of energy around him, he can control it and sense it, making it easy to dodge blasts and energy based attacks without sight.


Again, what types of energy? Is it the generic anime type energy? Also, do most non-physical attacks (Lightning,Fire,etc) set off this abiltiy? Also, does his control supercede other users?

Ghost Burst : This Ability Takes A While To Charge So He Doesn’t Use It Since It Takes too long. He Makes 1 Ghost Gather Up energy While He Gathers Up Energy Then They Fuel It Into his Body.

Wait, so all three ghosts gather energy for him to use? Again, what type of energy is it, and how does he use it? Does it make him stornger/faster? Can he use his own energy based attacks now?

Energy Bond : They Are Connected by A energy between them that connects their life force, mind, and allows them to switch places with each other’s body in battle allowing the other body to heal.

Do Re's ghosts remain active when he's not on the battlefield?

(Also if you're going to use the defenition of energy in your story that should be in your ablity section. Also that's extremely broken.)
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Oct 28, 2017 2:45 AM #1485153
1.He Can Absorb Electricity, Fire, Solar Energy, Magnetic etc.
2.The Ghosts Do Remain on the battlefield while he is gone but once he is knocked out or killed, they disappear.
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Oct 28, 2017 3:04 AM #1485154
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1.He Can Absorb Electricity, Fire, Solar Energy, Magnetic etc.

Why the Etc? are there more types of energy he can absorb?
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2.The Ghosts Do Remain on the battlefield while he is gone but once he is knocked out or killed, they disappear.

Can they still use the Ghost Burst when Re isn't on the battlefield?

Also you failed to answer the rest of my questions.
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Oct 28, 2017 3:28 AM #1485155
He can absorb Lunar Energy.
Actually they cant. since the energy gathered is transferred into Re. So if they wanted to do something they would just explode by using the energy
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Oct 28, 2017 3:34 AM #1485156
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He can absorb Lunar Energy.

Lunar energy? You do know that the moon just reflects the light of the sun, right?

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Actually they cant. since the energy gathered is transferred into Re. So if they wanted to do something they would just explode by using the energy

Makes sense.
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Oct 28, 2017 3:38 AM #1485157
The energy can be used for many different ways one it being harder punches, waves of energy, and maybe a form in the energy.
He Can used energy based attacks.
he does not supersede the other person.
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Oct 28, 2017 3:54 AM #1485158
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The energy can be used for many different ways one it being harder punches, waves of energy, and maybe a form in the energy.


And these are the only applications of the absorbed energy, right?

What types of abilities can he absorb? For example, can he absorb abilities that come from one's biology?

Also, can you asnwer this?
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Oct 28, 2017 6:46 PM #1485168
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And these are the only applications of the absorbed energy, right?
yes

Also, can you asnwer this?

not exactly say if the person's skin is rocky he cant absorb that
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Oct 28, 2017 11:39 PM #1485189
Even when they have no irises it’s good to see they can still look beautiful with such fabulous eyelashes.
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Oct 29, 2017 1:51 AM #1485198
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Even when they have no irises it’s good to see they can still look beautiful with such fabulous eyelashes.


Part of me wanted to say something about that, but I figured it was just a stylistic choice.