Kickin teh flame ****

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Nov 19, 2007 1:14 PM #68347
Omg worked on this a lot, unfinished though O_O
Edit: dont say it sucks, i want to improve, oke? help meh
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Nov 19, 2007 4:32 PM #68353
some reactions were bad like when they land on the ground and the flip seemed unrealistic so work on those otherwise i like it..
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Nov 19, 2007 4:44 PM #68354
he slid alot. when you use the onion skin try to line up the feet exactly. taking more time is better than getting flamed.
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Nov 19, 2007 5:12 PM #68356
FLAMED??!!! WTFF!!!1

K I'LL FIX IT, also, im making it big.Im gonna make this good. =_=
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Nov 19, 2007 5:15 PM #68357
another comment was the blood wasn't that good. some tut's might help.
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Nov 19, 2007 10:22 PM #68383
Legs get too long at one point. Easing is terrible.
The flame should have a few particles, too.
The animation is choppy all over, work on making smooth animations.

Yeah, the blood sucked too.
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Dec 30, 2007 4:40 PM #74999
:3 cool...but the legs are (too) long...
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Jan 10, 2008 6:56 PM #77331
lol it was gudgud apart from when he swung his leg in a freaky way at the start...
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Jan 13, 2008 9:48 AM #77885
Guys, don't criticise the way he draws his sticks, it's the animation that really matters. (Besides, thats how I used to draw mine.)
Also, it was quite choppy and the 'flames' looked nothing like flames, but that can usually be fixed with experience/practice, good luck with that.
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Jan 13, 2008 4:13 PM #77912
Quote from web-ding
Guys, don't criticise the way he draws his sticks, it's the animation that really matters.

Stick-Drawing-Critisism-And-Everything-Else-Of-The-Sort only affects Brush.

:/
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Jan 13, 2008 4:57 PM #77923
close this thread and wait for beginners section to reopen don't use blood or any details k? k.
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Jan 15, 2008 1:00 PM #78108
Quote from bloodymary
close this thread and wait for beginners section to reopen don't use blood or any details k? k.


wtf? . shattap
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Feb 2, 2008 8:43 PM #81561
nice bloodsplatter at the bottom :D
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Feb 14, 2008 9:24 PM #83469
Your good just work on the particles and blood.
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Feb 15, 2008 6:21 PM #83584
WHAT THE HELL HAPPENED THERE!! it looked like he twisted his ankle!! very smooth though