Schall's most awesome poems

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Aug 26, 2008 10:06 PM #235136
**** me. I love her.

Ein Schatten fällt in weichem Licht
Du stehst im Weg, ich seh in nicht
Ein greller Strahl aus weissem Schein
Der Traum von dir ist nie allein.

Die Sonne legt sich auf den Tag
Gedanken, die ich in mir trag
Ein rotes Lichtspiel trägt den Wind
Mich kümmert's nicht, denn ich bin blind.

Blind aus Liebe, blind vom Licht
das sanft aus deinen Augen sticht
Kein Spiegel bricht es jetzt entzwei
Der Traum von dir ist endlich frei.


Die Kerze brennt, sie brennt noch heller
die Sonne scheint, sie scheint noch greller
Jedes Schimmern, jeder Blick
Zeigt mir, ich will nie zurück.

Man blickt nicht rückwärts, wenn man rennt
denn dort ist, was wie Feuer brennt
Ich lauf mit dir, in Schattenspielen
Für einen Tag, auf den wir zielen.

Den Tag an dem die Sonne steht
weil unsre Liebe nie vergeht.
Die Wolken brechen langsam auf
doch weil ich nie alleine lauf
scheint die Sonne, Tag und nacht
Ich denk an dich, der Himmel lacht.


ENGLISH VERSION:

A shadow's sweeping through the day
I couldn't tell, you're in the way.
A dazzling hit of radiance
The dream of you is in my hands.

The sun lays heavy on the earth
Thoughts of you are always worth
A game of lights, one of a kind
I just don't care, for I am blind.

Blind from love and blind from shining
that's glowing from your eyes, defining
what mirrors of no kind retract
The dream of you, will be intact.

The candle burns, it's burning rapid
the sun still shines, it shines so vapid
But every shimmer, every sign
Never, you'd get left behind.

You don't look backwards, on the run
'cause hell will wait there, burning on
I run with you, where shadows fumble
Take my hand, we wouldn't tumble.

Until the day, that sun's warmed up
of running, we'll have had enough
our love will shine on, anyday
'cause yoU're still going down my way,
the sun will shine all day and night
I think of you, the sky turns bright.


Just fucking comment.
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Aug 26, 2008 10:23 PM #235150
I envy your poem writing skills, to be honest. This is brilliant along with the rest. Still, the first was absouletely amazing, the best.

Good work.
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Aug 26, 2008 11:15 PM #235230
Why would you post this on stickpage?
Find a writing forum, now.
>:c
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Aug 28, 2008 6:39 PM #236784
I don't enjoy poems but I know how hard they are to write, its hard to keep that little voice in your head quiet that says that this is stupid.
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Aug 31, 2008 3:25 AM #239909
Quote from Ren
Why would you post this on stickpage?
Find a writing forum, now.
>:c


I am in one, but I get even less comments there.


A new one, fun one, out of boredome:

Dude, slow down, where do you head?
Everything's already said
The world awaits the other way
No time to wait
or hesitate
This really ain't no place to stay.

Knock it off man, this is dumb
Until you're done, your hand is numb
Take that hand away from there
No time to touch
your dick so much
You really wouldn't go somewhere.

Just turn around, and leave the car
And take that stuff out of that jar
She cares not who the fuck you'd be
She hates you so
You wouldn't go
Time won't heal this, you will see

Take those camera's off her bead
and aim them to yourself instead
You'd earn some money, I can tell
Money on the internet
Money couldn't smell so bad
Fat-men fetish sure is swell.

A thousand and a million ways
To tell a woman, what you say
You had to pick the worst one out
Deep in wait
before her gate
Oh fuck, the cops, don't make a sound.

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Aug 31, 2008 5:37 AM #239955
haha, nice one schall. you really have some kickass talent, keep it up.
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Jan 27, 2009 9:21 PM #346790
Oh wow:


Das Wasser in Ferne
liegt hinter mir
Oh tiefblaue Blume
ich bleib bei dir.
Dein Blick spricht so deutlich,
verzaubert mich.
Worte
sind überflüssig.

Du weißt zu berühren
wie alles glänzt
Mein Herz schreit nach deinem
an dem es hängt.
Oh du, Blaue Blume,
es sehnt mich nach dir.
Liebe
ist unser Mittelpunkt.

Der Schatz deiner Augen
alles für mich
er heilt unsre Flügel
dann trage ich dich.
Wie Eisvögel fliegen
das werden wir.
Du wunderschöne,
so tiefblaue Blume
wie ich mich sehne
gehöre ich dir. ♥



The castaway waters
are way behind
oh shaded blue flower
I now am thine.
You look at me open
it sets me free.
Words
are redundant.

You know how to touch
to make it glow
Your heart is my shelter
that makes me grow.
Oh you, Blue Flower,
I'm aching for you.
Love
is our vital sign.

The treasure's your eyes
it's all I see
You're soothing my pain
whilst you carry me.
We'll fly like the angels
trust me true.
You wonderous Blue Flower
I belong to you. ♥
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Jan 27, 2009 9:25 PM #346794
You should have been born in year 1800.
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Jan 27, 2009 10:36 PM #346834
The new one went in perfectly with the music I was listening to.

Anyway, it's brilliant. I still love the first one so ****ing much.
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Jan 28, 2009 12:47 AM #346901
Quote from Mantha
You should have been born in year 1800.


Nah, his poems are too straightforward for the 1800's.

Just saying.
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Jan 28, 2009 1:26 AM #346933
From what I've learned of the Romantics era, he would fit imo.