My Animation [this is one of my first animations]

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Aug 18, 2008 10:58 PM #226461
img112.imageshack.us/my.php?image=myamazingfightwithrubbiml1.gif

[http:// at the beginning]

This is my alright fighting but the walking sucks, well its more floating. And sorry about the sword at the end, I ran out of ideas of how to end it so thats what I came up with.

Any tutorials that anyone can direct me to would be greatly appreciated [especially on walking]
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Aug 18, 2008 11:09 PM #226476
http://img112.imageshack.us/my.php?image=myamazingfightwithrubbiml1.gif

you need a higher frame rate and to work on easing and gravity.

go find some tutorials to learn from.
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Aug 19, 2008 4:05 AM #226772
it looks like you ignored some of the sticks and weapons while you were animating and it looked like they were frozen in place and if they were supposed to look like that at lest put a circle around it or make them slowly move up ant down otherwise try not to ignore anything while you work or it wont look realistic.
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Aug 19, 2008 10:58 AM #227063
Yeah, I forgot about the gun so I tried to bring it into the animation. And Rawgreen I have looked for tutorials on easing but I couldn't find any. Do you know of any (oh and thanks for the link).
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Aug 19, 2008 12:14 PM #227099
if you look at clone26's signature, you can find easing,..... also, you'll find plenty of tuts on easing and force, and even gravity on this site:
http://www.stonesbucket.com
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Aug 19, 2008 12:21 PM #227107
clone's signature has abosulutley no easing, so that is a lie.
also noone post their animations in beginner section anymore...what happened?
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Aug 19, 2008 12:25 PM #227112
Lol, that was funny. uhhhh work on your framing and everything the gun was in the air for too long lol.
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Aug 19, 2008 11:26 PM #227672
Thanks for the tips everyone, and Rawgreen thanks alot for the link and Ren, The only way to get some feedback would be to post out of the beginners section as some get ignored.
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Aug 22, 2008 6:49 PM #230771
Needs A Lot Of Work.

Everyone else covered it.
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Aug 23, 2008 2:03 AM #231053
I like the low gravity effect...
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Aug 23, 2008 2:12 AM #231063
How come all the blood splatters were the same?
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Aug 23, 2008 5:16 PM #231554
prbly he got the same stks from droidz and the animation wasnt that good but youll get better
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Aug 23, 2008 6:00 PM #231582
Quote from Ren
clone's signature has abosulutley no easing, so that is a lie.
also noone post their animations in beginner section anymore...what happened?
Lies and slander.
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Aug 23, 2008 7:24 PM #231659
I like the one when the little sick figure goes down the hole and got stabbed by those things sticking out. lol:Smile: