this is an animation i made with some guy punching a hole in a wall

please rate and comment

and i made a second one cause i thought the hole was 2 low and was made too quickly
but i decided not to post it.

The back was ultra stiff.You only moved 4 joints.If you punched a wall.Your hand would break and bleed if you did it with full force.There was no proper charge.You can enhance it by making his hand bleed.That was med beginner.You have to move EACH joint in every frame.

i know the back was as stiff as stiff gets
but i could never decide how to move it
and whenever i thought i had it people
on my own forum kept saying it was weird and stuff
so i kept it in the original form.

I'll tape your head to your ass and your cock if you don't listen to me.You want to become a great animator on the next generation of pivot right?I'm giving out real c&c so that the next pivot generation posters wont say just this.``Nice,keep it up,''.I give good c&c.

You need to move your back to improve your animation.If you move it wierd.Then try doing what your going to animate in real life.I'm a 12 year old kid with a heck of a wild imagination so I have no problem with stuff like that.Back on topic,I suggest you redo that animation and moving every single joint in your animation.If it moves wierd.Who says you can't improve?Practice makes perfect.

I see potential in you...May the force be with you...always.

Needs moar anticipation, easing, less stiffness, and choppyness. Also, try not to make the feet slide in your animations.

Are you blind?It didn't slide.If you had easing sliding would be better than walking.Sliding in the form of walking like for example.I collabed with demi angel and he did a slide in the form of a walk.It look pwnage as usual.Though if he would of continue it,it would've of been better.You have grammar problems.

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Are you blind?It didn't slide.If you had easing sliding would be better than walking.Sliding in the form of walking like for example.I collabed with demi angel and he did a slide in the form of a walk.It look pwnage as usual.Though if he would of continue it,it would've of been better.You have grammar problems.

Stop starting arguments. And my grammer is bad? Bullshit.

And gyohdon was right, you are a pompous dick.

I thought it was better than most begginers could do, but I noticed he didnt feel any pain and he didnt recoil to much.
but all in all, gen-ius!

Oh dude,thanks for callin meh that.I don't care what people say.I didn't say it was bad.I said I spotted a mistake.Thats all.Look whos talking bout negative posts you poor biatch.Can't we just ignore each other for once you pathetic person.

go die in a hole full of snakes

yes it did slide, the back foot slid.
It was good, try adding a lean back motion, to show real power.
engravedx, shut up, honestly, you suck at debating, and your grammar is just terrible.

good but i don't see how he could've made such a big crack :P.

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good but i don't see how he could've made such a big crack :P.

depends on how much force was displayed, my friend.

Quote from engravedx

Are you blind?It didn't slide.If you had easing sliding would be better than walking.Sliding in the form of walking like for example.I collabed with demi angel and he did a slide in the form of a walk.It look pwnage as usual.Though if he would of continue it,it would've of been better.You have grammar problems.

His grammar is a lot better than yours.



Ease it all out a little more, like most people said. Everything that's majorly wrong is something that would come with practice.

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depends on how much force was displayed, my friend.

Agreed familiar, but if he was to punch the wall like that wouldn't there be a even amount of space on each side in the crack?

SMC stfu

The feet did slide, and the hole in the wall wa slittle much don't you think?
you could get some good advice some the tutorials in the forums, or at Dark Demon.