Unfinished
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=780087 -attempt at a clean full body
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=962674 -fuck tha police part

Newer
http://www.trportfolio.net/upload/view_upload.php?id=162822 - I used NTG's tutorial for the jump, except I made it slower, because he's in space.

First - Was clean, but the hand movement wasn't fluid, was kinda choppy, and lacked easing. The steps were weird, they were small steps, and didn't look natural. Oh and the arm changed size, and also didn't move with ease, it kinda looked forced.

Second - Really bad, realy old, everything needs work.

Third - If he jumped in space, why did he go down? wouldn't he just raise up at single speed? also, he jumped forward, but on the way down he floated backwards a bit. The stick also changd his size a bit, from when he was about to jump, then when he landed. The Bg was ok, the asteroid wasn't that great tho.

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First - Was clean, but the hand movement wasn't fluid, was kinda choppy, and lacked easing. The steps were weird, they were small steps, and didn't look natural.
Yeah, that's what I get for using a low fps.
Second - Really bad, realy old, everything needs work.
D:
Third - If he jumped in space, why did he go down? wouldn't he just raise up at single speed? also, he jumped forward, but on the way down he floated backwards a bit.
k, I know nothing about how it is in space
THe stick also chnagd his size a bit, from when he was about to jump, then when he landed.
Yeah.
The Bg was ok, the asteroid wasn't that great tho.
k

kthx .

hmm first anims i have ever seen by you, the first is good but the salute is a little strange, the seconds, has extreme resizing, and the third the beginning of the jump is good but not the rest.

First: It looks pretty ok, although it also looks strange. It feels like he is having it cold and is moving very stiffish likish kinda ( I don't know D:)

second: The moves were really fast, the resizing is also huge, try to watch the onion skin and check how your stick moves.

Third: again the resizing, when he was in the air with his legs of the ground he was as high as he was when he stood normally.