Writing a Book.

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Aug 23, 2008 10:00 PM #231773
Well i'm making a book at the moment.
I'm not sure if i'll actually finish it but I thought of a great idea for a book about heaven.
I'll post the first page when i'm done with it.

If you have ideas, post em here.
And i'm not publishing it, i'm in Middle School, i'm just writing it for fun.
=D

Heres a little bit of it.
“Where am I?” Martin muttered. He looked around and saw nothing but darkness. He heard a voice from the darkness, “You’re in the afterlife now, boy.” “W-who said that?” he stuttered. He laid down low for fear he’d get attacked by something from death. Martin started breathing hard in fear. “Answer!” he yelled. “This is where you’re chosen to go to heaven or hell, but don’t get excited, I’ve been here for thousands of years waiting for God’s choice.” Said the mysterious voice again.
Martin felt a hand put on his shoulder. He froze, could that be God? “Hello, my son.” He said. It was him, the almighty lord of the heavens. Why had he died? He was only thirteen. He wasn’t meant to die so young, was he? “A-are you God?” he stuttered again. “Of course I am, my son!” He replied and lifted Martin off the ground. “But why me?” Martin asked, almost in tears. “I’m sorry, but getting thrown from a subway train at 70 mph, isn’t very easy to survive.” he replied calmly. There was a silence for a second but Martin said back uncomfortably, “That’s what happened to me?” “I’m afraid it is Martin, but I’ll be back soon, I have more children arriving at the gate” God said as Martin heard a “swoosh” sound from the darkness and saw tiny fragments of light.
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Aug 23, 2008 10:05 PM #231780
writing a book, aye?
i has the ultimate guide.
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Aug 23, 2008 10:09 PM #231787
any book written in 28 days will suck.
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Aug 23, 2008 10:09 PM #231789
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NO....WAY....
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Aug 23, 2008 10:11 PM #231797
Is making a book a new fad or something? Seriously I know like, 4 people incluing me and busted writing a book.
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Aug 24, 2008 2:18 AM #232098
Shit's weak
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Aug 24, 2008 2:31 AM #232103
well, judging your book based completely on the excerpt, i must say this is going to be one terrible book.

protip: learn to write, then, MAYBE write a story.

then, maybe write a book. but please don't
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Aug 24, 2008 8:09 AM #232313
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why the **** would you read a book on how to write a book?
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Aug 24, 2008 8:13 AM #232314
Aw lawd.



Literally.
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Aug 24, 2008 9:32 AM #232337
Quote from .Busted
Well i'm making a book at the moment.
I'm not sure if i'll actually finish it but I thought of a great idea for a book about heaven.
I'll post the first page when i'm done with it.

If you have ideas, post em here.
And i'm not publishing it, i'm in Middle School, i'm just writing it for fun.
=D

Heres a little bit of it.
“Where am I?” Martin muttered. He looked around and saw nothing but darkness. He heard a voice from the darkness, “You’re in the afterlife now, boy.” “W-who said that?” he stuttered. He laid down low for fear he’d get attacked by something from death. Martin started breathing hard in fear. “Answer!” he yelled. “This is where you’re chosen to go to heaven or hell, but don’t get excited, I’ve been here for thousands of years waiting for God’s choice.” Said the mysterious voice again.
Martin felt a hand put on his shoulder. He froze, could that be God? “Hello, my son.” He said. It was him, the almighty lord of the heavens. Why had he died? He was only thirteen. He wasn’t meant to die so young, was he? “A-are you God?” he stuttered again. “Of course I am, my son!” He replied and lifted Martin off the ground. “But why me?” Martin asked, almost in tears. “I’m sorry, but getting thrown from a subway train at 70 mph, isn’t very easy to survive.” he replied calmly. There was a silence for a second but Martin said back uncomfortably, “That’s what happened to me?” “I’m afraid it is Martin, but I’ll be back soon, I have more children arriving at the gate” God said as Martin heard a “swoosh” sound from the darkness and saw tiny fragments of light.



Dude,there are like 1000 books with the talking darkness .
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Aug 24, 2008 10:11 AM #232346
I thought it was a black guy >_>
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Aug 24, 2008 10:28 AM #232357
I don't read that much so i'm not a book expert but based on your advanced vocabulary and the idea of writing a book about heaven makes me wanna read it.